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The Rain

Staring into a cloudless sky
I feel the rain begin to pour
Wearing a raincoat
He splashes in the puddles
Mouth open
Raindrops dances on his tongue
I stare into Venus
Until the storm subsides
Free her mind
A storm will follow

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  1. Date: 8/9/2012 5:39:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Quilisa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 08/09/2012

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 3:22:00 AM

    Loving the images here..very nice!!

    Miller Avatar Quilisa Miller Date: 8/7/2012 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! My first work in a really long time, I appreciate the encouragement!