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Go Only Onward

(06/08/2012)

Come on now,
Just take that step and move onward
I know that pace is bumpy
But across that is happiness could be

If you don’t like the scene
Close your eyes
If you don’t like the noise
Turn up the music inside your heart
If you don’t like the company
Ignore them, or better, leave them from the start
Just make sure you cross that road
Where across is filled with hope, awaits for your key to load

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  1. Date: 3/11/2013 1:29:00 AM

    Inspiring! That is the words that first comes to mind when I read this... if you don't like the way things are you have no one to blame but yourself, profound! I am quickly becoming a fan of yours!

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 9:35:00 PM

    Hi there, just reading poems from the site, enjoyed this one!!!

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:05:00 PM

    what lovely and encouraging thoughts in this poem, sweetie. I enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 8:16:00 AM

    great my my ego right now. time to move on.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 12:47:00 AM

    Love it Dinda!!Beautiful poem!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:33:00 AM

    dinda, you have an amazing use of language going on here and a flow that puts you right into the dance of life!... beautiful!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:30:00 AM

    great write Dinda,lift yourself

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 10:26:00 AM

    Wisdom in your words here,Dinda:) Good to see you`re writing! Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 10:13:00 AM

    I like the metaphor you're using here about happiness and life :) soupmail

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 10:03:00 AM

    Lovely my dear Dinda!! Maybe we should collab again now we are both back. Hope your well luv. Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 9:31:00 AM

    Dinda, very good written......move forward. (my last poem: "move forward") - Have a lovely new week Dinda, glad to see you back. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)