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  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:27:00 PM
    awesome...,its amazing.:-)

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 3:57:00 PM
    Outstanding write my friend.I`ve been through that one myself,and I see each and every day as a blessing.Hell is no place to be,that`s for sure.You`ve touched me deeply with this acrostic,David.See you around my friend,and keep up the spirit! Arild

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 8:37:00 AM
    I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry David. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:59:00 PM
    I like this poem a lot, david. How did you know it is what I needed? Favortiting it :) I agree with the last line completely. In my religion however, we believe that a lost child like this does not in fact go to Hell, but Heaven. But not to get religious... thank you for your kind comments on my poetry, loved this poem, and all your work, really. =Juli-Michelle=

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 2:52:00 PM
    DAvid, I can't see where you placed with this one as I am not seeing it from the winners' list but congratulations and i bet it is high because you did a theme close to Susan's heart.Congrats!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 3:17:00 PM
    Congrats, also for yr Verb. Blessed Be¡

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 1:12:00 PM
    Congrats on your escape, then on finding love. Love, daver

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 8:17:00 AM
    Touching heartfelt write, David. Good luck with the contest. Thank you for placing me in your Virelai contest. So happy to hear that your guests loved the dessert and the poem as well!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 5:38:00 AM
    David, true or false? If true...then the similarities are uncanny. My dad drank.. adolescence was not too pleasant...I now find myself ostracised by siblings living in their own wee bubbles....I too thought of running away..from life.... The BIG difference is,I have yet to find that "one person".

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 7:12:00 PM
    A ladder that I climbed too. But it's nice to sit here and enjoy the view. Michael

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 1:06:00 PM
    This is a very beautiful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing it with us. Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 1:05:00 PM
    I feel this piece too. I also no longer have to look over my shoulder....

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 10:38:00 AM
    I agree with you wholeheartedly my friend! Glad you got out of that hell you were in! I got out my own demons that I had in my past, we all had them I believe! What a fantastic write David, I loved it! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 9:06:00 AM
    Heartfelt and heartbreaking write, David. Congrats on your wins, my friend

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 6:48:00 AM
    Sad one David glad you have it all now sweetie, nice write xx

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 5:44:00 AM
    Great story David. And creatively told. Our history, good and bad, is what makes us who we are today. Joe

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 5:33:00 AM
    just doing my time, for some crime, ive long forgotten, persecuted in younger rhymes, when life improves forgotten... love it mate....

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 4:42:00 AM
    Hi David can see myself in some of this brilliant write, have a good day my friend, all the best Owen