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god's safety

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god's safety

spent half
the life god
gave you in
darkness, corrupted
by the devil's ways,
got you wrapped 
around his finger,
chained, lost, hopeless,
giving up on yourself
you collapse by hell's
entrance, believing
what everyone has
told you...
when you finally hit
rock bottom, HE picks
you up again..
crying, you hear his voice
telling you it's okay
through the ones you
love!
collecting you're lost
soul and carrying
you back home
where you belong..
never here in person,
but forever here in spirit,
follows you wherever
you go, hand in hand
no matter what path you're
on...
he will forever 
save and love you!

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  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:04:00 PM
    Beautifull poem Rose, I love the meaning in your poem, love debra

    La Traille Avatar Rose La Traille
    Date: 9/13/2012 3:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :)
  1. Date: 8/6/2012 10:08:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup Rosa, have fun with poetry. - Good poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    La Traille Avatar Rose La Traille
    Date: 8/6/2012 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :)
  1. Date: 8/5/2012 10:03:00 PM
    I love truth. This is a strong witnessing poem! The Scribe

    La Traille Avatar Rose La Traille
    Date: 8/13/2012 10:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-)thank you
    Papyri Avatar Fiery Papyri
    Date: 8/5/2012 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Welcome to the Soup!