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She Fell To Hell

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Below is the poem entitled She Fell To Hell which was written by poet Jessica Stricker. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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She Fell To Hell

What if the wound is just to deep?
The blood just continues to seep.
Yet the one in pain never whispers a peep.
This secret she must keep.

This weight on her shoulder..
Her body grows colder,
Secret crushing her like a boulder.

All everyone sees is the smile she shows.
What's hidden below nobody knows.
While inside it grows and grows.

She just continues to move ahead.
While the fire deep inside is fed.
All the colors she see's turning 2 blood red.

Looking at her you'd never see how hard she fell.
The whispers say pick your poison well.
As for the secret you must never tell.

She watches a tear hit the ground.
Thankful yet again nobody is around.
For to this secret she is forever bound.

She screams out in pain hoping it's a nightmare.
Yet to answer her call no one is there.
To the pain she grows more aware.
Tell this secret.. Does she dare?

She needs to get it off her chest,
or she'll be dead at best.

She starts running looking for someone to tell.
For with every second she falls closer to hell.
Sadly she knows this all to well.

There's no one around when she cries out.
Her soul filling evermore with doubt.
You may ask what's this secret about? 

Well, I can not tell, for she never got to say.
She fell to hell before she could give it away.
It remains a secret to this day.
So, still want to complain how things don't go your way?

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  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:11:00 PM
    Jessica, Congratulations with your winning secret poem In Judy's " tell me your secret " contest.. thank you for sharing :-) :-) :-). Always & Forever * PD

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 1:14:00 PM
    Congrats on your placing 1st Jessica. When darkness falls so sloemnly that no one ever knows. I pray to God he carry's them which ever way they go. Let's just hope hell is a good rhyme for fell and nothing else. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:08:00 AM
    A great poem Jessica, and a much-deserved win! Congratulations... Samia

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 11:50:00 PM
    This a wonderful poem... Indeed, you have penned it well... Congrats on your deserving win... Well done~A.O

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:55:00 PM
    What a tremendous deserved win, so well written, the rhyming is amazing, its sad i know, but i loved it. Congrats. Love Terry xoxo got a 7 >>>

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:50:00 PM
    Lovely poem, made you read to the end. Congratulations....Seren

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 8:50:00 PM
    Thank you for entering my contest

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 8:28:00 AM
    loved it!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:02:00 PM
    Like the suspense. Enjoyed.

    Stricker Avatar Jessica Stricker
    Date: 8/16/2012 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks
  1. Date: 8/7/2012 7:34:00 PM
    I really like it. Makes the reader think about what this secret could possibly be and put their own thoughts into it really!! Awesome!!

    Stricker Avatar Jessica Stricker
    Date: 8/7/2012 10:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much :)
  1. Date: 8/5/2012 2:37:00 PM
    Great poem!!! Chris

    Stricker Avatar Jessica Stricker
    Date: 8/7/2012 10:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Chris
  1. Date: 8/4/2012 11:23:00 PM
    Oh wow..what a piece of art you've penned here...excellent from start to finish Jessica...please continue to write more...enjoyed..regards INK-U-SCRIPT

    Stricker Avatar Jessica Stricker
    Date: 8/7/2012 10:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thank you very much, and I'll always continue to write. It's one thing that helps me clear my mind, and something i just love to do all around. :)
  1. Date: 8/4/2012 11:08:00 PM
    And i shall to read more from you... nice penned:)

    Stricker Avatar Jessica Stricker
    Date: 8/7/2012 9:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad you enjoyed it because I enjoy your work as well :)
    Lee Avatar Joel Lee
    Date: 8/4/2012 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I meant: "I shall await to read more from you..." :D
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 4:56:00 PM
    Welcome to P-Soup Jessica, hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - you write very good - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

    Stricker Avatar Jessica Stricker
    Date: 8/4/2012 10:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 10:53:00 AM
    congrats...nice poem...(^_^) keep up the good work **Maria**

    Stricker Avatar Jessica Stricker
    Date: 8/3/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)