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Drowning Deeply in LOVE

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Drowning Deeply in LOVE

                Lips touch the tip of morning with the awakening
             of thine eyes,
           accompanied 
           by inexhaustible
            thoughts of only 
             you. Drifting away
              from abed, thoughts
              trace in tandem with
             thy body in lost sight
           within the flat-bottomed
         vessel. Water pouring
       down accreting to the
     seductive oils
     forming to
      crystallized
        foam.
          Drowning
            deeply
               in
                 Love.


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

08-02-2012

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  1. Date: 6/14/2013 5:36:00 AM

    Ink, oh I so love your words, they melt the heart. Just beautiful, my friend.....xx thankyou:) cherie

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 9:53:00 AM

    Amazing! It was so smooth the way it was written. Kind of how love can feel!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:56:00 AM

    Love it

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Ink, where are you! I have writer's block!

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 8:25:00 AM

    You drown so gracefully with that poetic curve you created. Love how it all consolidates into those last 4 words.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 6:14:00 PM

    Divine penning in verse and form! Cynthia (no wonder you have soooooo many followers...I'm smiling here)

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 4:31:00 PM

    This is very good, coming from someone who knows. But I hope you don't drown. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/17/2012 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly Lucilla!!
  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:45:00 PM

    INK, glad you commented on one of mine as it led me to your page, this is a poem I read more than once to absorb its meaning, and I mean that in the best of ways. Very moving. X Peace, Ruby

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/17/2012 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No problem Ruby..I'm glad that you shared with me!!!
  1. Date: 8/13/2012 12:19:00 AM

    me too..... drowing hard....

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/17/2012 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol..That's good news Carma..Congrats
  1. Date: 8/8/2012 2:28:00 PM

    Nice write. i like how you wrote it - JH

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/9/2012 8:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you J.H!!!
  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:55:00 PM

    I truely like how you express your love. And the words use to describe it. Awesome!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/9/2012 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly Maxeen!!
  1. Date: 8/7/2012 10:47:00 AM

    great write PG Ink,love the style,love the flow,love the words

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/9/2012 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard always!!
  1. Date: 8/6/2012 7:36:00 PM

    You just described my life with Rosanna. Beautiful piece my poet brother. MJF

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/9/2012 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh wow..thanks a lot Michael!
  1. Date: 8/6/2012 4:45:00 AM

    Hi Pace I do hope lots of people in the world feel what you have written here my friend, brill I love it, all the best Owen

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/9/2012 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly Owen!!
  1. Date: 8/5/2012 9:40:00 AM

    Soupmail...

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/9/2012 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ok
  1. Date: 8/5/2012 9:12:00 AM

    Nice write, Page. It makes me in love again while reading it. Thanks for sharing and wish you luck in all your endeavors.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/9/2012 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly Leonora!!
  1. Date: 8/4/2012 9:26:00 PM

    mmmmm... i love the image of tasting the morning... wow... this poem is one of your best ones yet... I love everything about it.. it is so dreamy and captivating. Last night I had a love revelation. I'm actually missing the feeling of falling and drowning in love... Hmmmm... hmmm..right back at you twice... Guess what I'm eating.. and I thought of~~~~~~~~~~~ ...xox~pd

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lmao...I have no clue..Thank you for sharing with me Pd..always a pleasure from the Destroyer!!! :)
  1. Date: 8/4/2012 7:58:00 PM

    Wow...what a great write!!!! You must have a lot of arsenal and inspirtation in that wonderful and creative mind of yours. It definitely shows. This poem has me falling into the same sea of love :-) Keep writing!!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love your comment!!! Always good to hear from you Doreen...that's one thing I try to do is to be creative...though it doesn't flow like your words..Huggs!!! And thank you dearly!!
  1. Date: 8/4/2012 11:16:00 AM

    you got more,pace??... looking forward!..:) huggs

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes madam..I will be posting soon! :)
  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:54:00 AM

    Potent piece of work fam....inspirational for me!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate that fam..let's keep it going!!!
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 5:37:00 PM

    Ooh, ooh oooh! My, my...just love the way your thoughts are drifting away..lovely form G INK. Thanks for stopping by me to read and leave a comment. One love. Joy Wells

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love your comment..:) thanks for stopping by..enjoyed your last poem I read!!!
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 11:19:00 AM

    very nice write G...thanks for stopping by...Joseph

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Joseph!!!
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:18:00 AM

    i can't breathe.. need oxygen here!... just breathless!!... hugggs, pace!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always a pleasure Nette..truly..Huggs!!!
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:17:00 AM

    Lips puckering up for a kiss - viewed sideways..... Love it. Suzette

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the kind visit!!
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:12:00 AM

    Wonder verse and form! Love both! C.Alvez

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly Cynthia!!! :)
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 5:32:00 AM

    Love that crystallized foam and this write of your Pace, enjoyed this afternoon :) Wilma

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Wilma!!! Always grateful for you to stop by!!
  1. Date: 8/2/2012 8:55:00 PM

    Simply Fantastic!! I marvel at your talent and skill. XOXO

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Bertha...love your support!!! Hugs!!! :)
  1. Date: 8/2/2012 8:29:00 PM

    Im quite impressed, Ink!! I dont know if you've noticed how your poetry has improved... Content, presentation, vocabulary... excellent write. Keep writing, my friend! Ruben.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Ruben...super thankful for that comment!!!
  1. Date: 8/2/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Pace, I think this is just fabulous, love the format as well, but most of all I love it when people use either thou, thy, thine, in modern poetry it just brings that little touch of flair.. well done...David

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David...always!!
  1. Date: 8/2/2012 3:35:00 PM

    Beautiful Page G. Hugs, Gail

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/5/2012 7:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gail!!! :)
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