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  1. Date: 5/13/2013 12:50:00 PM
    Impressive write. Congrats on your win Yasmin.

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 6:40:00 PM
    Hello to my friend across the sea!...Haven't heard from you in a while! This poem is absolutely stunning... 'the body in opiate mode' - Wow...

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 6:31:00 PM
    Hello Yasmin, hope you are feeling well. Congratulations with your awesome win... i like the warning in my dreams... always~LINDA

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 6:18:00 PM
    Congratulations Yasmin....great job..

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 6:10:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 9:10:00 PM
    Yasmin, I like how your dream poem is defining what dreams truly are. You did not sugar coat it but told actually what the scientific world has learned dreams to be, and you did it prettily as well.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 11:50:00 PM
    Very well written Yas....This poem just proves the great calibre of your poetry!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:06:00 PM
    In retrospect Yasmin,my dreams have communicated to me the highest truths - your psychological astuity is an inspiration for us all - nice vocab and word choice - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 4:09:00 PM
    What a brilliant write! Wow, Yasmin, I believe you have written a small masterpiece here! What an amazing poem my friend! I really enjoyed the line, "From the deep recesses of the mind, illusions unveil." what a fantastic line, so very powerful in its cast! This is a magnificent piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 3:27:00 PM
    Yas, wow, do you manage any sleep, very powerful.. good luck..David

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 2:12:00 PM
    You dream to... Yasmin.....yes, a break from reality - Like your dream poem, well written like always. - Wish you luck and hope you win! - big huggs Anne-Lise :)