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Across Ticks of Losing


Menaced by a triumphant chanting of lament
Entrancing the soul of Hades’ kin
Missed eruptions of the sensory nerves
Onomatopoeic of hollow gongs 
Resonating, maimed through the indescribable facets of
Your  forgotten youth.


Adjudged 3rd Place in Black Eyed Susan's Acrostic Contest
© 07-31-2012

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  1. Date: 8/14/2012 2:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on winning with this fine entry.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 6:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Glenn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:03:00 PM

    gs.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 7:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in my contest! I liked "missed eruptions..." :)

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 7:16:00 PM

    Losing your memory is losing everything. Great write and congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:42:00 PM

    A great loss to write of, forgotten youth. that's a topic close to my heart. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 7:36:00 AM

    Very clever title. Congratulations on your winning poem.