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  1. Palmer Avatar
    Richard Palmer
    Date: 8/13/2012 5:21:00 PM
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    great write and congrats Lisa
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/10/2012 5:42:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem Week" contest Lisa. Love, Carol
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 8/7/2012 5:59:00 PM
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    Lisa, Congrats on your wonderful win!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 8/5/2012 7:36:00 PM
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    Hi Lisa; Congrats on winning. What dreams may come. I like that. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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    kash poet
    Date: 8/5/2012 12:20:00 PM
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    Congrats Lisaon your win!Very good poem here by you!
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    David Williams
    Date: 8/5/2012 11:38:00 AM
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    Lisa congrats on your win, love it...David
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    Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/5/2012 11:25:00 AM
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    Very interesting and well done. According psychology, dreams are your unconscious trying to tie conscious moments together. Well done. Lee
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 8/5/2012 7:54:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win Lisa, well done xx
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/4/2012 8:04:00 PM
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    HI LISA, my friend ;-) congratulations with your awesome poem of the week. Thanks for the contest support. LUV~ PD
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    Keith Bickerstaffe
    Date: 7/31/2012 6:56:00 PM
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    This is simply brilliant, Lisa! Wonderful phrasing, cadence, rhyme and sharp imagery, and, I love your title! It reminded me of the Robin Williams movie of the same name.
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    Debra Squyres
    Date: 7/31/2012 12:10:00 PM
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    So so loving this !! Such lovely lines that flow together smoothly. I like that you took this to the light and dark side so well...Best of luck if this is for the dream contest...
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 7/31/2012 11:53:00 AM
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    This is a smashing write , love it Lisa
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 7/31/2012 11:26:00 AM
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    Lisa, this is very beautiful. Hugs, Gail
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    David Williams
    Date: 7/31/2012 11:10:00 AM
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    Lisa yep life is full of them..David
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 7/31/2012 10:59:00 AM
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    ‡ Also, I Am Favouring This Most Amazing Poem &, I Absolutely Love The Line, 'A Slow Senual Lover's Sweet Tender Kiss' * Wow ‡
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 7/31/2012 10:55:00 AM
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    ‡ I Love The Quality I Find Your Beauty's Wonderful Poetry & Rhymes, Beautiful Lisa * If In This Life Lived Only Our Dreams, Then, How Miserable Ones Heart Would Most Truly Be, I Believe * Quite Profound These Words Above; May Their Light Be Found To Ascend ... My Luv, Rachel ‡


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