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On the Shore

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On the Shore

On the shore her little feet stand
Fondly indeed on the beach's sand
On the ocean waves her nectar heart trust
Little did she know whether she must

Dampened sand beneath as she weeps with pain 
As the sea flapped dragon slays her castle again.
On the ocean waves her broken heart burst
Wondering how the stray sea could be so unjust 

Stronger was her dream than the nightmare that struck
Determined she was, leaving her foes awe-struck
Carved her Castle tower yet again.
Little architect's splendid castle is up again.

On the shore her little feet stand 
Firmly this time on the beach's sand

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  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:13:00 AM
    A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Ria. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 10:45:00 AM
    nice write Ria,your words stand firm

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 1:48:00 PM
    Ria, congrats on your win. - Lovely written and good rhyme. - Have a beautiful new week. - oxox // Anne-Lise

    Vij Avatar Ria Vij
    Date: 8/7/2012 5:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much
  1. Date: 8/5/2012 10:09:00 AM
    A love how this lovely poem flows, Ria! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

    Vij Avatar Ria Vij
    Date: 8/7/2012 5:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much. glad to know you liked it
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:38:00 AM
    Congratulations Ria xx

    Vij Avatar Ria Vij
    Date: 8/7/2012 5:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much. :)