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Daisy game

When I was young,
love was a perforated daisy petal.
Does he love me or not?

I'm old now and I realized,
I'm the daisy and love is mine
to give or not.

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  1. Date: 8/4/2012 7:35:00 AM

    How could I not check out the poetry of "raskin bobbins"? This is a perfect poem. Kathy

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 2:07:00 PM

    I am a grandma to 4 -(14+ 13+12 and one 8) - but still not "old" :) :) - Thank you for visit my poem raskin - love me....love me not.... // Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:21:00 AM

    Well said and good write raskin....never to "old" to try one more time ......love me....love me not....love me.... - oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 10:32:00 AM

    nice one! very clever...

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 7:27:00 AM

    Raskin, I like...David