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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 1:49:00 PM
    It's nice to go back and review your work. Nice rhyming scheme and a very sad piece. I really liked it. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:38:00 AM
    Simply written, but your words are collectively very descriptive. Your rhyming is decent as well.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 12:22:00 PM
    hi Nathan life is always worth living the trails and tribulations just make us stronger, keep a smile on, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 1:28:00 AM
    Nathan, very sad lines, life is for living..David