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Below is the poem entitled Wrists which was written by poet Nathan Fehr. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I slit my wrists
Once or twice
It hurts so bad
But it feels so nice

I try to remember
The good days we had
But all i remember
Is the bad

I go for a walk
And fake a smile
But i know
I'm not going to be happy for awhile

But then again
It cant be that bad
When I'm with you 
I'm never sad

But life sucks
I'm dating a whore
I don't think life is worth living anymore.

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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 1:49:00 PM
    It's nice to go back and review your work. Nice rhyming scheme and a very sad piece. I really liked it. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:38:00 AM
    Simply written, but your words are collectively very descriptive. Your rhyming is decent as well.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 12:22:00 PM
    hi Nathan life is always worth living the trails and tribulations just make us stronger, keep a smile on, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 1:28:00 AM
    Nathan, very sad lines, life is for living..David