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  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:04:00 PM
    Not a pice of bling...represents SO much more! Lovely poem and sentiment really is :-)

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 5:20:00 PM
    This is great! keep it up Dav. kingfemi.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:59:00 PM
    Well deserved win David. Lee

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:57:00 PM
    Oh yes,David..the heat is on:) A big congrats on a well deserved win too my friend.Have a great Sunday across the North Sea my friend..Arild

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Tremendous feeling came out from last two lines. Oh! so sweet. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 10:24:00 PM
    I like it... A lot!! Good Poem. Congrats.

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 1:05:00 PM
    She will say "Yes" (^_^) I like it..thanks for sharing "Maria"

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 4:28:00 PM
    Congrats David on your win from what I see by reading the other comments...I like this poem a lot..seems as if all men go through this stage.

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on your deserved win,David!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:20:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Debbie''s "Heat" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:37:00 AM
    Stressful in a beautiful way..thank you for sharing this moment! and thank you for your comment on my poem! Am sure she says a BIG YES!! Much love and light to both of you!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 9:03:00 AM
    Congratulations David; sounds like a stressful situation! The uncertainty will end when she finally says "I do!". Then you will have pages and volumes more to write. Great verse! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 6:38:00 AM
    Excellent and wonderful write,David."A helix of love".I love this. Congratulations on your win.kudos to you,pal.

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 5:45:00 AM
    :) Such a lovely romantic way to feel the heat. Congrats, so enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 7:10:00 AM
    David, guess what? I got a proposal from that publisher in Dublin! Now all I have to do is learn how to cut and paste.... Wish me luck.... Jean

    Williams Avatar David Williams
    Date: 7/31/2012 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jean ha ha, good luck, xx
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 10:15:00 PM
    Great !!!! A unique proposal, my friend!! I really like the play on words...very nice! Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 6:27:00 PM
    I am currently searching for my woman,this poem is driving me on! Nice artistic honesty David - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 4:20:00 PM
    Yes I do, now can I have the bling bling? You charm me David Williams, have a nice evening, hugs vie

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 4:13:00 PM
    the words we say will be ok, when it's eyes do glisten time.... great poem mate...

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:59:00 PM
    OMG!! Are you serious?? Congratulations big boy!! hope the answer is Yes! Yes! Yes! Jean