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Dreams From the Distant Past

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Dreams From the Distant Past


Dreams from the distant past calling me how can I stop in the middle of this race? In this crowd I am just another face of losing dreams which I once loved to see, no looking back we're now on a racing spree, changing lanes,breaking rules to increase pace Dreams from the distant past, sleeping in them my never grown wish tree, faded dreams of making the world a better place life is now just plastic smile and cold embrace, at the end we're not,what we wanted to be Dreams from the distant past. ******************************************** Placement:4th (August 2012) Contest:Rondine the Traffic of Life Sponsor:Nette Onclaud By:kash poet 29th July 2012 RONDINE: it is poetry form consisting of two stanzas, a septet (7 lines), and a quintet (5 lines), making the poem a total of 12 lines. Like the Rondeau there is a refrain which repeats the first phrase of the first line.(R), The RONDINE has a rhyme scheme of, a.b.b.a.a.b.R. a.b.b.a.R.

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  1. Date: 8/28/2012 12:40:00 AM
    great poem,,,, I can see why you won ;}

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 12:46:00 AM
    Kash, I was doing comments when, at around 10:30 the power went out!! For two hours I had no light or tv,etc. I sat out on the porch and did Sara's "quiet time" challenge, with just the light of the moon and sometimes my cell phone light to help me see. but I wrote two poems!! So will post one and get back off for bed!

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 5:34:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem Week" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 5:41:00 PM
    This poem is unstoppable, Kash! Congrats on another fabulous win!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 12:28:00 AM
    oh, yeah!.. congrats, kashi!..:)huggs!

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:30:00 PM
    congrats !!! loved your poem.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 7:00:00 PM
    Congrats, Kash, on the 1st place win..awesome work! Jag

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:33:00 AM
    Kash, congrats on your win, love it...David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win. I wish dreams could make the world a better place. Really made me think about my life. Well done. Lee

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 7:48:00 AM
    A belting win Kash , well done xx

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 7:16:00 AM
    congrats on your win Kash...nicely done

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:00:00 PM
    Kash;-) congratulations with your awesome poem of the week. Thanks for the contest support. your entry was truly outstanding... xox~LUV~ PD

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 7:07:00 PM
    congratulations on n inspired piece and win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:58:00 PM
    Kash ;-) congratulations with your awesome win in Nette's,, traffic contest... xox~PD

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:25:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win,Kash.

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 9:56:00 PM
    sorry I didn't get to this one earlier today to congratulate it. I was kind of skipping all around to see different winners. I need to work on a few more contest poems. Probably won't be here till tomorrow afternoon. Have a great day there in India!!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:48:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "The Traffic Of Life" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 3:19:00 PM
    Kash, congrats on your win...I love the plastic smile..David

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 3:00:00 PM
    ((()))Congrats on your winning work...Sara

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