Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer


Comments Inbox

 

DROWNING

Drowning sinking breathless 
chasing that dream 
leaping fast forward
 catching the air 
inhale that happiness
 exhale much negative
 enjoy the journey
 worth the wait
 in the end.

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 8/3/2012 12:28:00 PM

    A race through space and time... wonderful... Terry

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:28:00 AM

    ‡ The Journey Yesss, Sweet Beautiful Dawnie * I Love Your Photo, You Truly Are Quite Beautiful, Wow * 'Drowning Sinking Breathless;' Yeap, That's It & Thank You For Your Tender Beauty's Lovely Visit; Breathless * My Luv, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 6:47:00 AM

    Very very Nice Dawn.... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:26:00 PM

    In living we are drowning. what a cool concept!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 2:45:00 PM

    worthwhile journeys are always fulfilling,great write Dawn

    mclaughlin Avatar Dawn mclaughlin Date: 7/28/2012 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard x