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TUNES OF WAVES

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TUNES OF WAVES


In waters’ calm leisure, mellow tides drift Along back strides that always find their sway, The lighter blues, the deeper jades, that sift Each glimmer of mollusks that romp and play. From the swoon of bay when dusk slowly cranes Pewter the wavelets, darker steel the shore; Above, one bold and yellow stripe explores To jiggle in a curdled breeze and spills A frothy crest with waltzes soon to fade Before moon comes in her gathering wade. Notes I hold, on the ocean waves’ last set A gurgling never the same every time That I might grow thirsty and soon forget Salty ripples turning different chirps Never to taste the same hums in whirled flips. Contest of Francine Roberts On the Ocean Waves by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:08:00 AM
    A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 10:21:00 AM
    I knew it, I knew it !! Congrats !!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 2:58:00 AM
    Congrats Nette! Just lovely!

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 10:34:00 AM
    A fav for me!! Congrats on your win, Nette! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 1:35:00 PM
    Lovely imagery and sound! congrats Nette. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 8:30:00 AM
    Congratulations nette xx

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:49:00 AM
    hi Nette great imagery at work here, good luck in the comp, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:11:00 PM
    Colorful one on the ocean waves and i liked how you use more than one of the senses in your imagery. Very nice, Nette.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 8:37:00 AM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 4:07:00 AM
    Great poem. It is inspiring me to go for a stroll by the sea. Love it :-)

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:36:00 AM
    Such a lovely and peaceful scene, Nette! It feels like a dream...I am floating on one of those waves. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 4:00:00 PM
    From pewtered wavelets to the frothy crests,...I am drawn in with each and every wave...puts this tired gal in a wondrous trance! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 3:43:00 PM
    Wow:) This is a very artistic write,sweet Nette.I can feel/hear music in between the lines of this outstanding rhyme..Tunes of waves it is:-) Hope you`re well over there cute friend;-) Hugs and more..Arild

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 1:13:00 PM
    This is indeed a masterpiece !! I just can't pick a favorite line for they all fit so well together...in awe of your talent my friend. This is just so beautifully written...I want to be the wave !!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 12:45:00 PM
    This is the most beautiful rendition of the ocean's waves compiled into one write! You expressed the waves so perfectly that I was on the edge of the waters observing the ripples created by small waves rolling into the shore! You've done so awesome with this poem my friend, I am amazed at the extreme perfection you have accomplished with this piece Nette! You've have done masterfully! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 10:48:00 AM
    Hey! Put on Debussy's La Mer. Would love to hear this read to music. Good stuff, nette. Love, daver

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:48:00 AM
    Your words brought the beach alive. Beautiful poetry.

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:34:00 AM
    Wow....excelllent imagery in this rhyme...Love it Nette!Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:29:00 AM
    Very nice and soothing nette xx

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:01:00 AM
    .....let`s share the world with happiness. - Well done nette, love it. - oxox love Anne-Lise

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