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  1. Date: 8/20/2012 6:54:00 PM
    LOL!!! Great piece. Simple directions (cant be screwed up)! Though I hope your life is long and full of great health. Creative poem. I enjoyed it.

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  1. Date: 8/6/2012 1:33:00 PM
    I meant like.... I feel the same way, not like I was smiling cuz I want you to die or anything?? (Sorry lol)

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 1:31:00 PM
    This def had me smiling! Loved it!

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 4:32:00 AM
    A witty write on a serious subject...but I like the spirit of your poem. Life is to be celebrated and yes people talk the best afterwards, may be they reserve the best for the last!!

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:23:00 AM
    I love this. I hate the water welling up, but i love this. Thx

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 2:44:00 AM
    suicide by dynamite, nothing left .. though the crows will fight, plastic splosive with the lectric det, a splash of crimson no burial yet, disintergrations wise, and greener than me eyes, id bet. nah dont call the Vet... re: 'When I die ---Instructions' David Williams.... Don

    Date: 7/29/2012 4:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    things that come from reading your poetry hey:)
  1. Date: 7/28/2012 4:02:00 PM
    hahaha,sad write with a lot of humour,love it David

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 3:06:00 PM
    love this witty - but sensible write, David

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 2:51:00 PM
    I love your attitude here.......treating death as a fact of life, makes very good sense. So why not have a sense as humor as well?! Well done, David!!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 1:11:00 PM
    "(check wind direction first:)"...enjoyed this write, but no wish you to have this celebraion for a very long time! Some sadness and a lot of wit! Thanks for the comment, it had been one of my favorite places to walk.:) Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 12:11:00 PM
    Ha ha, this is a humorous poem David! I really enjoyed the grandiosity within this funny poem my friend! "...celebrate life, not death...and People will talk!" ha ha what a line that is" Awesome piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 6:37:00 AM
    I like this, Yo! I'll be there with bells on spreading rumors about you behind the scene,"David was a mad driver who drove like his wheels were on fire, but Yo! he was a good man, then I'll stick a lovely Rose on your suit before they close you up for the night and leave a rose on your cardboard box for all the fun we shared here at soup, your soup girl forever, Viexxx

    Williams Avatar David Williams
    Date: 7/28/2012 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha Vie, this is shaping up for a great party,,
  1. Date: 7/28/2012 4:36:00 AM
    It won't be far away after that crack about me David, I am a very quiet person in real life - ha ha. Just give us some notice and we can get our party frocks out.... just joking xx