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At My Last Goodbye- A Duo-rhyme

What really happens when its your time to die, Your last breath taken, does your soul leave and fly. Is there really a deceased family member there to greet, Someone you loved greatly, waiting for the final meet. Is heaven really beautiful, at the gate is there a seat, If you’ve lived a good life, is it like a perfect retreat. Can there be life after death, I hope, or is this deceit, When we die, are we gone, just our bodies in concrete. As a scientific person my thoughts make it hard to lie, But I believe my family will greet me at my last goodbye.
Written July 27, 2012 For Andrea Dietrich’s contest Duo-rhyme

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  1. Date: 7/28/2012 2:32:00 AM

    ever present friends...never really leave you...my dad comes to visit and i hear him on occasion...

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 2:31:00 AM

    Hmm...Lee ,iambic Tetrameter?

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 9:00:00 PM

    I believe we will be met by all our loved ones, and it shall be one big reunion, so nice to have you back among us, welcome back Lee, hugs vie

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage Date: 7/27/2012 9:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh, thanks so much. Glad to be back. Appreciate the nice comments. Lee