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Desert Landscape

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Desert Landscape

Desert wind howls in my veins
I seem to be impregnated with loneliness
Joshua trees lose direction
Their limbs disoriented from God...

It's so much sand in my heart
full of hour glasses stuck in their track
I keep on waking up but cannot stand up
Dirt too dirty, ground too shaky for dreaming

Nightmares slap me with indifference
I am saved...am I saved from loneliness?
The wind stopped but I can still breathe
I AM alive and my loneliness can't kill me!!!!

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  1. Date: 7/25/2012 10:29:00 PM

    awesome piece

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 10:28:00 PM

    Its nicely written and positivity at the end-I like it:)

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 9:11:00 PM

    great poem, I like the form used and that it sticks to the subject