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Feeling it

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Feeling it

You know i tried to play it down,

I tried to say i wasn't into this,

But deep down inside,

My body was really feeling it...

You know i tried to keep it quite,

tried to make myself seem cool,

But you didnt keep your eyes off me,

damn i must've looked like a fool.

We danced and i held your body close to mine,

I could feel every breathe,

Every move,

And you could just as easily feel mine.

After that it was all a big blur,

we where together all the time,

We soon started going out,

I wanted you to be all mine.

Now it's 2 years down the road,

So perfectly together, our lives seem to fit,

As we both take our vows,

My heart is really feeling it...

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  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:23:00 AM
    Ahh..beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!!!! Enjoyed this one!!!