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Hunger

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Hunger

He comes to my solitary dreams,
Reality blurring at the seams.
He undresses me with his crimson eyes,
Within their obscure depths hungers arise.
Enthralled against all common sense,
Being weak my only defense.
His touch burns a fiery path,
His tongue follows with a wicked bath.
Shivering with passion’s fire,
His intent apparent within his desire.
His voice like a symphony of rain,
Awakens a craving within an idle brain.
Softly he kisses my damp brow,
My fervent resistances willingly allow.
His bleached smile sharp sabered thorn,
Torrent of blood flows from flesh torn.
He suckles me like a fine goblet of wine
Purring his ecstasy so divine.
Lulling my internal screams,
Redemption from this nightmarish dream.
Hush my trepidations, hush,
His deadly kiss so lush.
He cradles my soul by a fragile breath,
Disseminating me to an unavoidable death.
So young to have humanity torn,
And like him, assimilated reborn.

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  1. Date: 10/15/2013 7:16:00 PM
    This is a creative write. The "monster" in your dreams seems passionate but also scary. You took the reader on a journey of creepiness and "fatal" love. nice job

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any Poem" contest Lisa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:14:00 PM
    LISA, A LATE CONGRATS ON MY ANY POEM GOES CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 9:31:00 AM
    wonderful! congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:04:00 PM
    Lisa, congrats on your nice little win,, always~PD

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:00:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading this passionate and passion-filled write. Congratulations on your well-deserved high placement. Well done, Lisa. :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 7:45:00 PM
    Congratulations for your win Lisa. I don't know who your nighttime visitor is but I would be afraid to go to sleep. Joyce

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:55:00 PM
    Lisa, you are amazing!!! i think the invasion of dreams can mean lust... your poems reborn ending comes captive with a epic image..love it... stopping by to say hi & good night... xox~PD