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Those Lips

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Those Lips

Those lips,
     enticing, soft and warm
Hidden, in part, by your mustache
tickling my neck and ear
as you softly kiss and tease

Those lips,
     pleasing, smiling
how often I've touched,
tasted and kissed
those wonderful lips

Those lips,
     now weary, tight with pain
tinged in blue as you fight to breathe, 
to kiss me one last time, and
whisper "I love you" through
                                          those lips.

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:22:00 PM
    Excellent write!

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:59:00 PM
    Hi Trudy, A nice sensual write..Thanks for sharing.. Ken

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 2:35:00 PM
    Such a touching write..you haven't been here in a while I'm hoping you are well and cherish this memory. Happy Thanks Giving Light & Love

    Rider Avatar Trudy Diane Rider
    Date: 11/21/2012 9:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hoping to get back here soon, with Dave sick and a new puppy, seems I have no time for me and my poetry anymore. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I miss PS so much!
  1. Date: 9/8/2012 11:56:00 PM
    sensual and beautiful

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 6:49:00 PM
    wow, this is great

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 6:05:00 PM
    A very sensual write...good luck in the contest. Sounds like a winner. One love. Joy Wells

    Rider Avatar Trudy Diane Rider
    Date: 7/23/2012 6:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Joy!
  1. Date: 7/23/2012 5:35:00 PM
    Beautiful, enjoyed your poetry tonight hugs vie

    Rider Avatar Trudy Diane Rider
    Date: 7/23/2012 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Vienna. :-)
  1. Date: 7/23/2012 5:30:00 PM
    What a sweet poem...reminds me of my huband and me..but he don't have a mustashe any more since he is militay. once in a while he gets fuzzy...but not to bad lol. Great write Jane XoXo

    Rider Avatar Trudy Diane Rider
    Date: 7/23/2012 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the lovely comments Jane, my husband also, no longer sports the mustache due to medical reasons now, but I remember and I have pictures...sometimes I can even still feel it...LOL