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insanity or death

She had failed to see the warning signs
Maybe 'cause love is blind
A poisoned love now flows through her veins
As she became captive to his every desire

He was insanely jealous
a twisted love became his notion
Now she had to choose between
insanity or death
She chose to set the captive free.....

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  1. Date: 8/10/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Hey Joe, congrats and lots of love.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on a touching poem and your win.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 6:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nathan's "Insanity Or Death" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 2:51:00 AM

    Joseph congrats on your win, like it..David

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 1:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Joseph. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:21:00 PM

    Joseph , a big congratulations in Nate's contest... his winners always seem to amaze.. i know how picky he is.... glad to see you here...pd

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:19:00 PM

    I remember this one. One of my favorites in the contest. Big congrats.

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 8/10/2012 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:08:00 PM

    congrats. Nate'

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 8/10/2012 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Nate.....glad i was able to make the cut
  1. Date: 7/27/2012 12:04:00 AM

    So, did she kill him!? Fabulous action-packed thought provoking entry...I likey! gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 4:21:00 PM

    Harrowing and chilling. I like it!

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 11:29:00 PM

    I really love how you did your entry for the contest, Joseph. I hope it places!

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 6:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 2:49:00 PM

    wow-I know people like that so sad

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Edmond
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:09:00 AM

    excellent Joesph, so profound, and so realistic in todays world. harry

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Harry
  1. Date: 7/23/2012 7:36:00 AM

    Scary.... Did you get my mail? xx

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/26/2012 6:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Mandy....
  1. Date: 7/22/2012 5:35:00 PM

    awesome!!!

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 7/23/2012 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Karen..