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Lips

LIPS

L isping,  I nnocent,  P retty  like  a  kid's
L ustful,  I ntense,  P assionate as adult's
Uttering but  LOVE,  LOVE,  LOVE  till dead.


BY: S.Jagathsimhan Nair
21  jul  12
For  Carol Brown’s Contest

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  1. Date: 7/27/2012 11:18:00 AM

    Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:53:00 PM

    Interesting unique work..Enjoyed reading ...((()))Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 4:02:00 AM

    Jag, super congrats on your win, excellent write.. very creative write...David

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 11:59:00 PM

    Nice piece,Jag.great verse. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 11:23:00 PM

    Really sweet write. Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:14:00 PM

    congrats Jag on a super sweet write and win for this unique write on lips luv.. always a delight..

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:09:00 PM

    great pen JAG

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:51:00 PM

    congrads Jaggery!

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 9:02:00 PM

    great write Jag,good luck,check my entry Paint the World

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 8:47:00 PM

    It's like a verse, BUT yet it's also like an acrostic...you have your own unique style and flair with this contest theme, Jaggy...from a child-like image to old age...the passionate lips move on...thanks for sharing this one! gwendolen

    R. Avatar Gwendolen R. Date: 7/21/2012 11:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yep..hey, could u give me some pointers on my shape poem?...where'd ya go?..
    Nair Avatar S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 7/21/2012 8:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are back from the trip? Hope u had a nice time...:!!! Jag
  1. Date: 7/21/2012 5:11:00 PM

    Nice way to do this one, Jag!! love on those lips!!

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 2:00:00 PM

    Seductive lips..... - Wish yours "Lips" luck in contest, jag ! - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 1:43:00 PM

    I love this clever write Jag. Well done! Best wishes in the contest. Love and Blessings, Rhonda