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Hello Maria

Hello, Maria......... Hello, is that you my love Maria Please talk to me without keeping silent Your silence could make my heart break I know you are angry for what I have done But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday Hello, are you there my love Maria Please talk to me without crying Your cry makes my heart cry more than you I know you don't want to talk to me now But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday Hello, are you listening to me, my love Maria Please talk to me without have worries in your heart Your worries makes my heart melt more than you I know you don't want me any more But forgive me my love I was drunk yesterday Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam

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  1. Date: 7/3/2013 11:42:00 AM

    Ok, I forgive you already..LOL!! If only my love is like that....(^__^) Awesome poem about your Maria...thanks for sharing friend Ravi. cheers!! Maria :)

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/3/2013 10:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 8/10/2012 10:43:00 AM

    I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Ravi. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 8/11/2012 10:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comment Carol Appreciated
  1. Date: 7/21/2012 8:39:00 PM

    Hi Ravi,,,it looks as tho u and I don't write as much as we would like..am I right?...This poem stands out to me..It's as tho u are saying that u are just human...please forgive your behavior, whatever it was...reflective and raw...enjoyed your transparency. gwendolen

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/22/2012 4:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/21/2012 5:03:00 PM

    Ditto what Anna Lise told you!! This was a very interesting one to read, Ravi.

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/22/2012 3:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comment Andrea Appreciated
    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/22/2012 3:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/21/2012 4:35:00 AM

    .....do not come home drunk Ravi, Maria do not like it. - well written poem Ravi. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/22/2012 3:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for your comment Anne Appreciated