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  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:27:00 PM
    Hi Rix,, love this... but it needs butterflies....Butterfly in the sky I can go twice as high Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow I can go anywhere Friends to know And ways to grow A Reading Rainbow I can be anything Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow A Reading Rainbow ...pd

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:59:00 AM
    I'm Chilled to the core, Gwen.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 11:22:00 PM
    This is absolutely awesome Gwendolen ,,,,, congratulations on your win , you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 5:19:00 PM
    this is very well written.. So many sad stories of broken child hoods. Rip at the heart strings.. But you are a bigger and stronger person because of what your parents did. congrats on the win

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 12:34:00 AM
    this was an awesome insight Gwendolen .. thoughts to ponder my friend .. yes Ron is a dear soul helping me so with poetry .. we read together .. then I dictate my comment .. he types for me ..for now .. my hands are swollen and not able to flex fingers to type .. also need new computer for people like me who cannot use fingers any more. well we all get tested in different ways but never r defeated luv ..

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:04:00 AM
    Congratulations, Gwenie, on the win with this heart-rending piece, lots of luv to you!! Jag

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 1:06:00 AM
    Is this drawn from experiece Gwendolen, or just imagination?? I wish you the best of results in the contest; thank you for the comments on (a partners tale) I put it in the idyll catagory because I considered the chance of actualilty springing from a certain potential an ideal situation, yours Joe..)

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:02:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Gwen. I don't even know what to say to a poem like this. It just makes me sad. May God help the little ones to find the light.

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 5:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Gwen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 12:47:00 PM
    Gwen, this is one chilling write.. I see congratulations are in order as well.. Hope things are going well with you ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 10:58:00 PM
    Thats very sad, Gwen...but a great courageous write by you. Congrats!

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 4:37:00 PM
    soup mail...

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 1:04:00 PM
    Come on lovely Gwen, let's see your shape poem, you can do it,..did you know St. Gwendolen is the patron saint of LOVERS......David

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:51:00 PM
    Omg,this is a chilling,disturbing image.Well thought out.No child deserves this undeniable pain infliction.Especially from a mother.Wow,you nailed profound emotion from me.I could read this over and over!Thanks for your recent comment on my ''To Hell And Back'' poem~I love to write,especially when it is a deep expression required.Have a great day Gwen.Keep in touch love~sincerely

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 9:34:00 AM
    This is a well crafted beautiful poem, Gwendolen.Hope you are well.My book Moonlight and Solitude has been launched in a grand function here in India.If you want a copy ,soupmail me.Lovingly,Fabiyas

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:32:00 AM
    i can see why this placed high, gwenie.. a fine story teller you are.. gotta have a book published!..congrats with love and huggs! :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 3:30:00 PM
    Dark, cute, scary, nostalgic...this has it all...very impressive write here!!

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 4:29:00 AM
    Gwen, have just posted a blog on shape if it helps at all....David

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 3:04:00 AM
    Gwen, congrats on your win, love it..excellent write...David

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 4:22:00 PM
    Wow Gwen, stupendous, congrats on your win hugs vie