Spit Upon by Carol Sunshine Brown


Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/11/2013 9:34:00 PM wow... it is like karma in your senryu.....xox~LINDA
Victoria Anderson-Throop Date: 9/30/2012 3:07:00 PM Carol, thanks for the welcome and advice...am in africa now and very slow internet makes it difficult to read many fellow poets..(one good thing about the good ole USA...) I like your style..you have a clear voice.. Victoria
Joseph May Date: 8/10/2012 8:59:00 AM lovely write Carol...enjoyed...thanks for stopping by...love...Joseph
Yesha Shah Date: 8/10/2012 5:02:00 AM Sad write but very well penned, Carol. Thank you always for your kind words on my pages.
Debbie Duncan Date: 8/9/2012 11:50:00 PM I do love the Senryu & haiku's ;} I need to post mine I guess ,,,, have a blessed day Carol ;}
Doreen Wright Date: 7/30/2012 7:36:00 PM Oh BOY do I know this sentiment too well!! Great senryu and relevant too.
Modupe Sefunmi Date: 7/30/2012 6:50:00 AM Hmmm, this is good
kerry singleton Date: 7/27/2012 3:54:00 PM Oh I like this :)
Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/26/2012 1:23:00 PM a sad one! Light & Love
nette onclaud Date: 7/24/2012 11:48:00 AM painfully beautiful, carol...the visuals stick on my mind!.thank you again for including me in your lips contest; it inspires me to better myself..:) huggs!
kathryn collins Date: 7/24/2012 7:19:00 AM Dear Carol - there's a lovely sting to this one. love, Kathy
Robert Ball Date: 7/23/2012 7:57:00 AM Hi carol, like you I have been behind in replies to my devoted followers,now my health has returned and will be more visible on the soup so please forgive me in this late reply, you as usual havethe pen and the vision for the poems youwrite and you are one of my favorites on the soup. Godbless bob
Caryl Muzzey Date: 7/22/2012 9:08:00 AM A wonderful Senryu Carol, I enjoyed the read. Keep your creature thoughts flowing~ Caryl
Sherese Gooden Date: 7/21/2012 8:46:00 PM Way to go Carol. Hope to catch upon my reading of your beautiful poetry. You are a great poet. Your comments on my poetry are really appreciated.
Gail DeBole Date: 7/21/2012 6:50:00 PM Hi Carol - Like this alot. I agree. Words are only words. It's the intent behind the words that's important. Thanks for your positive support regarding my poetry. - Gail
bl devnath Date: 7/21/2012 2:26:00 PM A heartless man can never feel the pain of heart of other or others. Intelligent heartless cheats the soft heart with sweet words for dishonest business. Loved your poem in the form of Senryu. Always, bl
jack horne Date: 7/21/2012 10:44:00 AM sad but powerful write herre, Carol. Have a great weekend and congrats on all your wins : )
Joy Wellington Date: 7/20/2012 8:14:00 PM A few words, big story there Carol!! Great write. One love. Joy Wells
elizabeth wesley Date: 7/20/2012 2:54:00 PM I've know a few Carolyn but don't think any live here at Soup! :)
Russell Sivey Date: 7/20/2012 12:59:00 PM Wow, Carol, you struck a chilly chord there! What an immense poem that means so much! Such mockery! Great Work!!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/20/2012 11:36:00 AM perfect ending, those sweet words are truly a mockery!
David Williams Date: 7/20/2012 11:11:00 AM Carol, I like it..David
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2012 8:00:00 AM Well done but so sad Carol. - oxox love Anne-Lise
yasmin khan Date: 7/20/2012 7:57:00 AM sad senryu but good write Carol..

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