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  1. Date: 7/22/2012 7:35:00 PM

    sad story but it's hard to tell dicipline from abuse. only God knows. but if you ask Him i bet He can fix it. cause if He don't; He's makin somebody.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Lisa, this composition reinforces the belief that poetry is about defiance for bettering the world;fear not the cruel,for they are truly the weak & poor- great metaphor - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 6:09:00 PM

    Oh my...I hate abuser's so sad especially for the child makes me sad, love yourself it gives you strength & confidence, much love & many blessing to you Lisa xx

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 7:59:00 PM

    great write Lisa,touching

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:34:00 AM

    A good description of this tragic state, Lisa. You write from a deep place.

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:49:00 AM

    Very deep Lisa...enjoyed much.

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:17:00 AM

    You truly write with your heart and soul,Lisa.Sending bigs hugs to you.Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 9:11:00 AM

    hard hitting but well put over xx

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 7:42:00 AM

    Ah the shivers begin to crawl as i read this, your heavy laden with memories a raw diamond in the making my dear Lisa, what can I say, your one of my fav poetesses here, give that angel of yours a big hug and a kiss for me, and yes, bestow on her all the love you've been deprived, her innocence will glow inside your heart and heal the wounds. Love You girl, Vie