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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Hello there ma'am nice to meet you. i am so excited to learn these kinds of writings. thank you for the beautiful example.

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:35:00 PM
    the 3rd senryu is my favorite... deep... pd

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:18:00 PM
    sad when love ends...Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 2:30:00 PM
    Love it Carol , sad , but you wrote it well ;}

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 5:03:00 AM
    Touching and poignant write Carol. very well done senryu. Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 4:06:00 PM
    Lovely¡ I adore Yr Verb¡

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:12:00 PM
    Sad but beautiful. All the best Carol. Have a serene weekend.

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 1:24:00 PM
    hope you are OK there's another sad one! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 7:20:00 AM
    Carol - I just love that very last line. It must finally always come. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 10:36:00 AM
    It is very passionate and deep,Carol.Well done!Thank you for congratulations on my poem being entered to the final round of poetry soup international contest.With love,Fabiyas

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 12:41:00 PM
    I admire your willingness to venture into those dim & dangerous dens Carol - being remembered isn't everything,just being is paramount- thanks for sharing your soul- J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 6:54:00 PM
    Hi Carol - Like the form and the way this poem is crafted. - Gail

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 2:13:00 PM
    It's sad poem no doubt, but it's the reality show of life that no one can deny. Wonderfully done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 12:56:00 PM
    This is a truly incredible and fantastic write Carol! I am amazed at its grandiosity and the power of the words my friend! This line is very awesome, "heart feels dead to the world now..." I really loved that line! It fit well into your poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:55:00 AM
    Very sad expression, feels like someone going mute and losing all individuality. Maybe just a sigh to keep going...