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  1. Date: 8/16/2012 7:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Second Chance" contest Yasmin. Sorry for the belated congratulations but so much going on at this time. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 11:01:00 AM

    Kuddos on your win, Yasmin! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:38:00 AM

    Congratulations Yasmin xx

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 3:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on a great win Yas!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:58:00 AM

    Yas, congrats on your win..excellent..David

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:48:00 AM

    YASMIN.congratulations with your awesome second chance poem. Thank you for the support..luv~PD

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 9:30:00 AM

    A lovely Rondeau Yasmin, a pure delight. Best to you in the contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 3:45:00 AM

    Wonderful, dear Yasmin! Sorry not been able to visit your poems often for some time now. Good luck with the contest. Bye...catch up soon.

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 3:25:00 PM

    Interesting work..I need to look up thistledown again..Enjoyed reading..This reads like a great contest..Those works with the repeat lines are not so easy to write..You did really well with it...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 12:18:00 PM

    It does good to the soul to read this poem Yasmin, and if it is good food for soul then it must be a delicacy from our Princess Yasmin, well done my dear, big hugs from Toronto, where the traffic never dies out, love vie

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Wonderful write my friend! I only have one suggestion, if you accept, the refrain is supposed to be the first phrase of the first line..."Like a thistledown"! I don't mean to be offensive or nitpicky, that's just what Nette asked for in her contest description. Thought you might like to know. Besides that minor thing, this is a fabulous poem Yasmin, I really enjoyed it a lot! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 3:22:00 AM

    yep,finally back.Lovely vacation,but the humidity was too much for me during the last few days.Its nice to be back home again:) Take Care Always,Arild

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 3:16:00 AM

    ....touch of silken breeze.......a soulful peace....ooohhh lovely Yasmin. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 3:12:00 AM

    Hi Yas,enjoyed your peaceful write today:) Feel like am on a wonderful journey while reading it..Have a great day! Always,Arild