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Warpath Woman -

I need a woman who can dance on a diamond and who can curse on a candle with equal aplomb,I need a woman that can calm like a bomb,

I want a woman that can sew ginger stiches on a sad man's soul,I need a woman that can sing the sorrow sweet from unexpected defeat,

I need a woman I should trust like the sun,one that will find fun in the mud,carry a ton,laugh when its done,a lady that can rob a mob ,an old mom,

I want a woman that can slap a kid like shes petting a dog,one that speaks to spirits as though she was born in the fog,having eyes that compete,

I need a woman that can raze a nation,shun reservation,and raise the meek and weak to sublimation,a woman that could die with a smile,

I want a woman that can hug,shove & tug me,a fine lady that tells me " despite working for the world you are a king handsome & rude all the while "  -

J.A.B.  2008

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  1. Date: 7/9/2014 4:40:00 PM

    Well you don't ask for much at all! A great poem my friend, very interesting and pleasing to read, I hope you always find what you are looking for :)

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/9/2014 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I admit Casarah, seek a super woman, a creature fierce and compassionate, seductive, sensitive, studious and steadfast, I need an extraordinary girl Casarah
  1. Date: 6/24/2014 6:54:00 AM

    This might be the best one I have read by you Justin. I don't read a lot, bc reading spins my head. IF I come across something like this, and your newest poem I read them over and over. You piped into the creative wellspring on this piece in 08. I have a short list of favorites this will be on. hole E. Shit this is a superb poem.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 6/24/2014 8:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much JSL. I finally found this Woman JSL., and I'll always be grateful for her touch. J.A.B.
  1. Date: 5/21/2014 1:13:00 PM

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  1. Date: 1/15/2014 2:09:00 PM

    Sure is a tall order.....She must be a goddess to fit the bill. Very interesting and unusual requirements, Justin. Fascinating....

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 1/16/2014 1:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well Eileen, I need a dynamic woman, loyal and completely lovable. J.A.B.
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 4:37:00 PM

    Amazingly beautiful poem..!! If I am a man I will surely compete with you in search of women like this. I hope you've found her, Justin.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 6/15/2013 2:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sometimes I have her close, sometimes She is far away Shirley - thanks for the tender respect - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/11/2012 7:50:00 PM

    This is a super sexy being; just so well rounded, all over I bet! Got me drooling, and on this treasure hunt; Good luck! I love what you do poet, keep burning! Scribe ML

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/11/2012 9:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yeah Scribe, thats my dream girl! I find your encouragement very fulfilling my friend - I place your work in very high esteem!J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 10:49:00 PM

    AHA! Glad I decided to read this! Awesome verse. Hope you have found that woman - and if not, I hope you find her soon. She's somewhere around here...hmmm....;) Enjoyed this today, among some other poems you have written. I like the speaking to spirits part. Is that weird to like? Haha. My captcha says: 666V....hm... I hope no one's too religious here. O_O Always, Laura

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 8/20/2012 11:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Eagerly hunting for that woman whom will make me complete Laura - I think we need to respect spirits, to let them help us, like gaurdian angels - thanks so much my friend - 666 hasn't bothered me too much! J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 7/22/2012 4:41:00 AM

    Fine end-line and inner-line rhyming... speckled with assonance and alliteration and full of excellent phrasing. Great title! Best wishes, Keith

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/22/2012 10:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for being a mentor Keith,to us all- you are a learned craftsman;thanks for sharing your expertise- J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/22/2012 2:20:00 AM

    Justin, I don't know about a ballet stance.. but give me them diamonds and I will dance on them :-) I love your poem.. Your second and third lines are my favorite. I can smile when all is lost.. :-( (-: Here you have represented a powerful woman to love.. you have cradled my heart with this poem. Well Justin, I think the women you are searching for can be in many of us.. one way or another war has it path on us.. I'm glad all of the above is what influences a man in your stance. xox~ PD

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/22/2012 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have jewels for you P.D.- the only woman that I am capable of loving is supremely powerful- You undertand P.D.,thank you;I love your genius- J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/21/2012 7:31:00 AM

    Sounds like you crave excitement Justin; they are out there so don't give up. We all have our priorities and why shouldyour dreams not come true! :). Loved your visit and sweet comment!

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/22/2012 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I can't afford to give up Elizabeth,the search is all I have - J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/20/2012 10:58:00 AM

    are you sure you want an old mom? heehee. This is neat-O. Reminds me of that song I heard on the radio a year or two ago, where he sings about the kind of woman he wants! Using unusual images. Keep up your creative pen!

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/20/2012 11:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I adore you humor Andrea- I need a woman that is in love with Life - I treasure you encouragement - I'll do my best to keep the fire going - J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/20/2012 4:12:00 AM

    Hope you find a woman like this in your well written poem Justin. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/20/2012 11:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm so glad that you are stimulated by this piece - Poetry is my stance & my Soul, it is the breath of my heart and the justice of my mind - thanks for being kind - you look so very happy in you avatar Anne J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/20/2012 1:32:00 AM

    Oh, I'm sure she is out there whomping dragons while still taking moments in between to kiss and hug the children! Enjoyed reading this piece, Justin! Sounds like she might clunk you for being rude, but will love you just the same! Best wishes, Mikki

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/20/2012 11:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My rudeness is just a symptom of my crudeness,but even this trait can lend creativity & care - I appreciate you whimsical comment Mikki - I can take a hit - thanks for your attention - J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/19/2012 6:45:00 PM

    Wow! Hope she's out there Justin, quiet a vivid description you depict, by the title of your honored poem it is a warrior of the high order you seek, kind of like Joan of Arc, charging her white horses into battle, you must pray her in as an old friend once told me, if you need something just pray it in, peace, Vie.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner
    Date: 7/19/2012 8:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Vienna, I'm honroed & titilated by your historical reference - I'm awestruck by the import of your generous suggestion - thanks for caring - J.A.B.