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The Fast Lane

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The Fast Lane

Cruisin' in the fast lane, all life long.
No idea where I have been,
Here and there but don't know when.
Where did I go wrong,
Marching to this crazy song.
A paper bag, a pint of gin,
Cruisin' in the fast lane.
Not sure where I belong,
But there I, with sheepish grin,
Blinded by the spin I'm in,
Swingin' within the throng,
Cruisin' in the fast lane...




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  1. Date: 1/4/2013 8:22:00 PM

    can't seem to find a poem to see of yours not even on this back page! but I am remembering this poem. I had not noticed before it is rondeau!! How unusual and clever to make it in six syllable lines!

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 8:47:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win. A great example of a rondine.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 11:20:00 PM

    Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 6:49:00 PM

    Congratulations on your first place win. Great going. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:55:00 PM

    Craig, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win in Nette's,, traffic contest... xox~PD

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:43:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "The Traffic Of Life" contest Craig. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:39:00 PM

    Very nice!!Congrats Craig on your big win!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 3:10:00 PM

    Craig congrats on your win..a well deserved win...David

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:24:00 AM

    Love it! Congrats! fav. line: Blinded by the spin I'm in. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 10:58:00 AM

    I do hope you got out of that lane NOW! ;)Congrad's on your fine write winning! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 9:51:00 AM

    congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Congrats, Craig! Just AWESOME. Thumbs way up to Nette for selecting this as first place. :-) Happy golfing! Cyndi (who is out and about to with family most days. Sun and silliness, picnics and pollywogs. HUGS

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:44:00 AM

    Congrats Craig on your 1st place win, love vie

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:43:00 AM

    Congrats my friend..Ive been on a cruise or 2 of my own..lol.. I just love this. BG

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:19:00 AM

    " a paper bag, a pint of gin,"... so crisp the image, craig... big cheers for a top win in my contest!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:45:00 AM

    Congrats on your awesome first place win, Craig!! Love and Blessings

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:37:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Craig xx

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 5:45:00 AM

    congrats craig on a first place win for a quality piece of poetic art luv..

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 11:19:00 PM

    foibles are often the foundation of our wisdom - no aplogies for livin' - your poem makes feel feel good about myself,thanks - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 11:18:00 PM

    our foibles are often time the foundation of our wisdom - no aplogies for livin' - your poem makes feel feel good about myself,thanks - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 1:53:00 PM

    Interesting entry for Nette's Onclaud's contest..The fast lane is where so many are located today..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 11:52:00 AM

    I love how you did this contest entry. Wonderful, Craig. Like a song!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 10:18:00 AM

    very nice rhyming...this one reminds me the 'Eagles' song 'Life in the Fast Lane'...enjoyed it lots & best of luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 6:44:00 PM

    Wow, Craig!... this a fine entry for Nette's contest...sounds like it could be put to music! - Tim