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You're The One Who Holds The Key

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You're The One Who Holds The Key

From the moment I first saw you,
my heart became attached.
It was under my lock and key,
but you also had one to match.
A part of me feels missing,
whenever you're not around.
But when you're by my side,
I never feel lost but always found.
But before I ever met you
I surely didn't know,
that you'd soon be within' my life,
and that our love would begin to grow.
You have your special qualities,
that brightens my whole day.
For your love is buried within' my heart,
where I'm intending on it to stay.
You have a sense of humor,
that no one else can match.
Whenever my feelings feel dim or down,
you have a self-uprising patch.
You're the one I can grab onto,
if I ever need a hug.
You know the key to just how,
to reveal unto me your love.
I appreciate all the support you give,
even when I don't insist.
For if I'm ever in a situation,
I know you'll be there to help assist.
The key of knowing I had found my love,
is I had that feeling inside.
And knowing the one that held the key,
had the power to keep it alive.
All of these numerous feelings,
tells of how our love should always be.
They'll remain locked and kept inside me,
for you're the one who holds the key.

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 10:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Dawn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 3:34:00 AM
    Dawn super congrats on your win, excellent write...David

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:14:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 7:26:00 AM
    congrats Dawn on a top ten win for a top notch poem luv..

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 2:25:00 AM
    Beautiful write

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 10:54:00 PM
    This is amazing ;) Keep writing.