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  1. Date: 8/9/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "To Hell And Back" contest Joann. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:24:00 PM

    Joann congrats on your win, very good...David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:44:00 AM

    Congrats on your wonderful win Joann

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:33:00 PM

    JOANN :-) , this has been my favorite contest out of all the ones I have sponsored this year.. Congratulations and thank you for the double journey... good night... XOX~ PD

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 6:33:00 AM

    Fascinating write Joann; you take me through darkness then find the light. So subtle the transition and the imagery is exceptional. Luv, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 5:22:00 PM

    Love the idea of taking a monumental geographical formation and painting it in mythological terms. Good Job Joann!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 12:37:00 AM

    Great poem, but the turning point does not work that well for me. Maybe a different word(s) to mirror Hell/Light? I know of the area and it is beautifully described. Your reference to the hole at Antarctica which is supposed to lead to a world under the world, has long been the speculation of a certain group of people and there is even photographic evidence to support this theory. Mount Erebus was, also, the site where the plane went down, with all lives lost (late last century). A good write, Joann. Good luck in the competition. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 11:59:00 AM

    this is a poetic treat so well quilled with mythological touches and great use of form, joann... best winning huggs!.. lovely!:)

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 8:49:00 PM

    Wow! What a ride! Two opposing hexaverse poems pitting light against dark... Mysterious and dangerous shrinking down to one word, then rising slowly back up to a glorious, healing ending...can't do it much better than that! Going DIRECTLY to favorites - Tim

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 8:33:00 PM

    Great write! Enjoyed reading your poem!~Tammy~

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 7:58:00 AM

    Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this one..I learned something new but of course for some reason it doesn't stick so well now ..Thanks for your presence at my blog..Your well wishes and prays go far..Sara

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 5:42:00 PM

    This is unbelievable ,,,,, I'm sitting here in total awe...Wow Joann!!

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 4:46:00 PM

    You are absolutely genious with this piece, Joann. I love everything about it.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 3:49:00 PM

    What a descriptive write my friend! I really enjoyed the expressiveness that you have displayed in your powerful poem! This is a wondrous piece! Great Work!!