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Distant Thunder - A Shan-zi Poem

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Distant Thunder - A Shan-zi Poem

Water ripples On the pond surface Concentric circles Of perfect shape Raindrops plopping In rhythmic grace Announcing the storm

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 5:19:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Shanzi" contest Joe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 10:24:00 AM

    Joe, congrats on your win, last stanza great haiku...David

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 9:42:00 AM

    I really like how you did yours, Joe. Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 9:29:00 AM

    A magical blend of words, Joe! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 3:14:00 PM

    ((()))Congrats on your winning work..I really like this one..Very descriptive and expressive work...Sara

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 8:03:00 AM

    Very nice Joe.Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Fantastic Shanzi :-) Congrats on your 2nd place win.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 5:22:00 AM

    congrats Joe on an amazing win for this incredible poem.. feeling the beauty luv..

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 3:57:00 AM

    Great Shanzi and loved the images especially painted by the 3rd and 4th lines, "concentric circles". Congratulations with the win!

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 5:15:00 PM

    I love the way the storm announces itself - beautiful images. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Wonderful...enjoyed your shanzi...best of luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 4:45:00 PM

    Ah we wait for it with open arms, nice words penned, I love the concentric circles part, lately you've been writing a beautiful storm Joe, keep it up, as the wind pick up, follow it where it may. xxxvie

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 4:11:00 PM

    So cool how you put this together. Very nice my friend. Michael