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  1. Brown Avatar
    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/26/2012 6:18:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placing in Brian's "#190"contest Kelsey. Love, Carol
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 7/22/2012 9:37:00 PM
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    Kelsey-such a strong free verse about life from an upcoming young poet..impressive win...you are at the top of your game today! congrats, gwendolen
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 7/22/2012 3:16:00 PM
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    Not fun at all! HUGS Congrad's on your fine verse winning! Light & Love
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 7/22/2012 12:56:00 PM
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    Congrats Kelsey on your 1st place win, great poetry, keep it up, hugs vie
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    David Williams
    Date: 7/22/2012 10:47:00 AM
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    Kelsey congrats on your win, excellent piece..David
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/22/2012 10:24:00 AM
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    what an interesting poem to make us think!! Congrats on your big win in Brian's contest!
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 7/22/2012 9:09:00 AM
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    Great portrait of emotions. Congratulations.
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 7/22/2012 5:52:00 AM
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    Very nicely expressed... congratulations on your win! Terry
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    kash poet
    Date: 7/22/2012 2:10:00 AM
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    Congrats Kelsey on your win.Nicely expressed feelings in this poem.Enjoyed.
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    Kelsey Paetzold
    Date: 7/21/2012 9:43:00 PM
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    Thank you everyone :)
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    Sherese Gooden
    Date: 7/21/2012 9:03:00 PM
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    Clever expression of that disease. Congrats on your win, Kelsey.
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 7/21/2012 1:51:00 PM
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    in sickness do we find the test of love,kelsey.. congrats on your top win!..:) huggs
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 7/21/2012 10:15:00 AM
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    If love is a disease, I don't want to be cured! I love this poignant write, Kelsey. Congrats on your first place win! :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

    Paetzold Avatar Kelsey Paetzold Date: 7/21/2012 9:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You :)
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 7/21/2012 8:50:00 AM
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    Congrats on this top win..love is an incurable disease, take care:) Jag
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 7/17/2012 4:20:00 PM
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    Moving written poem, but well done Kelsey. - Like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise