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Smoke

                     A
                      wisp
                         of
                           smoke
                                is
                                  going
                                      where
                                             I
                                             don't
                                              know
                                              yet
                                             I'll
                                         hurry
                                       there
                                     For
                                    if
                                   I
                              catch
                             that
                           wisp
                          of
                           smoke
                            my
                               hand
                                   will
                                     hold
                                         the
                                            line
                                                it
                                                 broke
                                                      In
                                                       the
                                                          air
                                                           above
                                                           my
                                                         head
                                                      Where
                                                     that
                                                   wisp
                                                 of
                                               smoke
                                             was
                                           led

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 8:54:00 AM

    WOW! This one is so cool! Awesome job :)

  1. Date: 8/3/2012 9:59:00 PM

    Caleb--A hearty congrats for the most intriguing shape poem! You really did great work once again! Not surprised to see you in the winners' list with this SMOKIN' entry! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 6:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Caleb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 12:10:00 AM

    Great idea, Caleb! ...and the shape is amazing! Congratulations on your win. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 10:55:00 PM

    good poem Caleb

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 5:50:00 AM

    congrats on your win Caleb

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:33:00 PM

    NICE SHAPE CALEB..... CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN..XOXOXOX~PD

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 5:58:00 PM

    A creative work, Caleb. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 2:40:00 PM

    Congrats, Caleb! A wonderful and unique write and form!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 1:20:00 PM

    Congratulations caleb a very wistful shape. Great shape and verse xx

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 1:12:00 PM

    Creative work...Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 12:34:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, Caleb.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Caleb congrats on your win, it led you to a win, excellent..David

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 12:17:00 PM

    Caleb, love the feel here--great entry and wonderful thoughts!!!!

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 5:48:00 AM

    Fabulous concept Caleb and you pulled it off brilliantly :) all the best if for the contest :) Wilma

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 8:33:00 AM

    oh yes, caleb!...lovely and very creative words in here with dizzying mists and shape... best of luck and huggs!.:)

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 9:13:00 PM

    wow, Caleb, I sure wish I could have a creative "spark" like this one!!! SMOKIN'!!!

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 12:25:00 PM

    There must be fire somewhere.....Brilliant!!

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 9:08:00 AM

    Love it..... - oxox Anne-Lise