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Smoke

                     A
                      wisp
                         of
                           smoke
                                is
                                  going
                                      where
                                             I
                                             don't
                                              know
                                              yet
                                             I'll
                                         hurry
                                       there
                                     For
                                    if
                                   I
                              catch
                             that
                           wisp
                          of
                           smoke
                            my
                               hand
                                   will
                                     hold
                                         the
                                            line
                                                it
                                                 broke
                                                      In
                                                       the
                                                          air
                                                           above
                                                           my
                                                         head
                                                      Where
                                                     that
                                                   wisp
                                                 of
                                               smoke
                                             was
                                           led

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    Heather Ober
    Date: 3/15/2013 8:54:00 AM
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    WOW! This one is so cool! Awesome job :)
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 8/3/2012 9:59:00 PM
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    Caleb--A hearty congrats for the most intriguing shape poem! You really did great work once again! Not surprised to see you in the winners' list with this SMOKIN' entry! Gwendolen
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/1/2012 6:13:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Caleb. Love, Carol
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 8/1/2012 12:10:00 AM
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    Great idea, Caleb! ...and the shape is amazing! Congratulations on your win. Ruben.
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    Ruth Courtney
    Date: 7/31/2012 10:55:00 PM
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    good poem Caleb
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    Joseph May
    Date: 7/30/2012 5:50:00 AM
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    congrats on your win Caleb
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 7/29/2012 10:33:00 PM
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    NICE SHAPE CALEB..... CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN..XOXOXOX~PD
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 7/29/2012 5:58:00 PM
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    A creative work, Caleb. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 7/29/2012 2:40:00 PM
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    Congrats, Caleb! A wonderful and unique write and form!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 7/29/2012 1:20:00 PM
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    Congratulations caleb a very wistful shape. Great shape and verse xx
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 7/29/2012 1:12:00 PM
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    Creative work...Congrats on your win..Sara
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    Suzette Crous
    Date: 7/29/2012 12:34:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win, Caleb.
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    David Williams
    Date: 7/29/2012 12:19:00 PM
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    Caleb congrats on your win, it led you to a win, excellent..David
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    craig cornish
    Date: 7/29/2012 12:17:00 PM
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    Caleb, love the feel here--great entry and wonderful thoughts!!!!
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 7/22/2012 5:48:00 AM
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    Fabulous concept Caleb and you pulled it off brilliantly :) all the best if for the contest :) Wilma
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 7/18/2012 8:33:00 AM
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    oh yes, caleb!...lovely and very creative words in here with dizzying mists and shape... best of luck and huggs!.:)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/17/2012 9:13:00 PM
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    wow, Caleb, I sure wish I could have a creative "spark" like this one!!! SMOKIN'!!!
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    kash poet
    Date: 7/17/2012 12:25:00 PM
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    There must be fire somewhere.....Brilliant!!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 7/17/2012 9:08:00 AM
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    Love it..... - oxox Anne-Lise


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