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Cave In

Minutes drip like raindrops	
Streaming ever so slowly
Eroding my heart
Chipping away pieces
Turning it to dust
That place for you
Its slowly caving in
Time floods in
Flowing like a tidal wave
Eating away the walls
The hole is getting larger
Collapse is nearing

Hours fade to weeks
The emptiness grows
Black and white visions
Growing blurry by the second
Losing the silhouette of you
It fades to black
You drift into a world
A world of nothing

Weeks fall to months
Months jump to years
The cavern has collapsed
My visions have gone
The shadows danced away
So long ago

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  1. Date: 9/21/2012 10:58:00 PM

    Wonderful sad emotion in this poem

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 9:34:00 PM

    This writing spoke of so many emotions and to me it spoke of growing and change. I really loved it i have felt this before as lost love fades from my life. Although sad, time really does heal all wounds. This poetry captured that! I loved it!

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 11:47:00 PM

    read with emphaty...good write :) SK

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 12:56:00 AM

    very sad and written so well