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LIVING UNLIVING

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Below is the poem entitled LIVING UNLIVING which was written by poet MARIA HAMRICK. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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LIVING UNLIVING

                              THE LIVING EVERYDAY CAN;T SLOW
                              DOWN TO ENJOY THE UNLIVING THAT
                               JUST WISHED FOR A SECOND CHANCE.
                           SPECIAL LIVING TAKING THEIR HEARTS;
                          TO HELP THE ONE'S LEFT BEHIND.
                             THE SAYING IS YOU HAVE TO HIT BOTTOM ;
                              TO START CLAMING BACK UP .
                             LIFE IS THE PATH WE DECIDE TO TAKE; 
                               LOOK AWAY OR REACH OUT A HAND ;
                               HOW IS TAKING ; STEALING;LIFE LIKE;
                               NOTHING WRONG?WAR; KILLING; 
                               WOW.... WHAT A FURTURE FOR THE CHILDREN.
                                 CHILDREN LIVING ; UNLIVING WHAT A WAY 
                                                    FOR THE FUTURE.

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  1. Date: 7/16/2012 1:19:00 PM
    it's sad but true how can we really live when it seems that we are held back against our will. and how can we teach our children in this society

    HAMRICK Avatar MARIA HAMRICK
    Date: 10/11/2012 2:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    TODAY MORE AND MORE ARE STEPPING UP AND HOLDING OUT THER HAND BECAUSE TODAY IN THIS WORLD WE THE PEOPLE ARE THE ONE;S WITH HOPE; FAITH; STRIAGHT; AND NEVER BACKING DOWN WILL OVER COME ANYTHING WE JUST HAVE TO STAND ALL OF US TOGATHER AND KEEP FIGHTNG .