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Lori Lucas McClure
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Innocense Lost
Garden paradise Brushstroke vision of Eden innocense lost
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Gareth James
Date: 1/12/2013 5:07:00 PM
A full story in 5-7-5. Takes talent and imagination. Well done on a beautifully portrayed vision of this scene
Debra Squyres
Date: 1/8/2013 6:34:00 PM
Very descriptive haiku... Enjoyed !!
tristen temple
Date: 9/25/2012 10:44:00 AM
*.* Splashed Water Colours Amid The Celestial Heavens, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Lori ˜ A Flowers Petals Floating Down Through The Gazing Stars ˜ Innocence Lost ˜ In The Beginning, My Love, Tristen *.*
Richard Palmer
Date: 8/11/2012 1:25:00 PM
nice,Lori
david scott
Date: 7/26/2012 8:57:00 AM
nice poem I still thing the heart remains a child x david scott
Robert Pettit
Date: 7/22/2012 9:55:00 PM
Reminds me of the first few chapters of the Book of Genesis in the Old Testament. Very descriptive haiku.
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 7/21/2012 5:33:00 AM
Lori....very good written. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 7/19/2012 12:50:00 PM
Lori, you are very right. There we lost the whole essence of man even in absence. Cheers.
elizabeth wesley
Date: 7/17/2012 2:50:00 PM
Such a great way to describe the loss that affects us all. Elizabeth
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/15/2012 9:48:00 PM
I love that middle line, brushstroke vision of Eden!
