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The big wheel

The speed, invigorating,
damp mist, breeze through my hair,
aghast at the roar's and scream's from a far,
faster and faster,
my palm's getting clammier and clammier,
stillness in mid air,
my heart skips a beat,
please, please get me to my feet.

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Lisa's "Unnamed County Fair"contest Amanda. Love, Carol

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan Date: 10/23/2012 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you xx <3
  1. Date: 7/23/2012 12:07:00 PM

    Congrates on your win! Jane XoXo

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan Date: 10/23/2012 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you xx <3
  1. Date: 7/23/2012 5:07:00 AM

    nice descriptions! congrats on your win!

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan Date: 10/23/2012 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you xx <3
  1. Date: 7/23/2012 3:30:00 AM

    Amanda congrats on your win, love it..David

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan Date: 10/23/2012 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you xx <3
  1. Date: 7/14/2012 4:35:00 AM

    Oooo. I am rolling with your words... Nice poem... Terry

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan Date: 7/14/2012 6:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Terry, glad you like it and feel like you are rolling at the fair!!!! Means a lot thank you have a good day xx <3