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Fine as wine

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Fine as wine

Fine as wine, 
Give me some 
Of yuh good 
Thug passion.

You got mi
Dripping wet,
From the way
You MEKE mi
Sweat.

Drive mi car,
With speed
And reve yuh
Engine, vroooom;
Vroom... 

And knock knock, goes
Mi shocks,as we catch di 
Seats on fire with extreme
Thunder between the
Gears.

Tick, tock boom, boom
Bang, bang baby!!!! Yuh
Ignite that nuclear bomb
And erupt mi peach juicer,
P***y cat... Meow!!!!!




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  1. Date: 7/13/2012 12:39:00 PM
    wow,great write Carma,love it

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 7/13/2012 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Always that monster truck reveing yuh engine, Lol... Thanks Richie!!!!
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:13:00 AM
    Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Carma. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 7/13/2012 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx carol, always glad I could intertain.....
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 3:26:00 AM
    Crazy sweet!

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 7/13/2012 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Crazy sweet is always mi nature... Thanx Vicky
  1. Date: 7/13/2012 2:40:00 AM
    Carma, that's it, don't beat about the bush..love it..David

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 7/13/2012 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "It's always good to beat the bush lol.... Thanks David."