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Dying Rose

Vanishing beauty
Your charms rest in memory
Altars chant her name

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:13:00 AM

    Nice haiku James.

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 9:05:00 AM

    Congratulations James on a well deserved win!

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 8:57:00 AM

    It's a wonderful sacrifice penned with golden pen. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 12:45:00 PM

    BEAUTIFUL job of writing on this haiku, Jimbo...not surprised it's a winner...have a fine day my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:05:00 PM

    Beautiful and touching, James...congrats to you! Love and Blessings :))

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:22:00 PM

    James, Congratulations in Brian's CONTEST NO 196. enjoyed stopping by *luv~PD

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 5:20:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#196" contest James.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:29:00 PM

    this is so touching James, well done. Congratulations on your win, however I suspect this poem is more than a contest. Take care Lee

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:08:00 PM

    Beautiful haiku James, congrats on your special win, hugs vie

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:34:00 PM

    Congratulations on a winnning haiku.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 2:26:00 AM

    Jimbo, congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:21:00 AM

    James, congratulations in Brian Strand's contest.. take care....xox~ PD

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:03:00 AM

    You made it a powerful symbol,James.Thanks for congrats!

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:08:00 PM

    Lovely, James. And I take it as symbolic.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Soup mail...Sara

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 1:00:00 PM

    Beautiful and deep haiku James - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 5:31:00 AM

    The imagery here is beautiful,James.Its incredible to read so much out of a short write.Have a splendid Minnesota weekend over there.We have a f-f-freezzzing summer on this side of the soup bowl..Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 3:11:00 PM

    Short but so deep, erupts into many visions for my mind to ponder. Thanks for commenting on Depression

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 12:14:00 PM

    ..and her lingering presence stirs.. such soulful write, james... goood job!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 9:32:00 AM

    i enjoyed reading this. thanks for sharing, Jancarl

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 7:18:00 AM

    This Haiku dear poet, is so uplifting ! A caption in bronze beneath an oil painting is the vision which fills my thoughts as I read this wonderful write of yours James ! Have a wonderful week sir....much love, james

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 10:53:00 PM

    Love this, simply beautiful.~Tammy~

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 2:40:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this one today..Not sure your intended interpertation..I feel that it is deeper than seems..Sara

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 9:04:00 AM

    But the scent remains Jim; love this image you give to me! :)

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 1:53:00 PM

    lovely words and imagery James givinng this flower persona .. hope u r doing well luv.. we are all wonderful..

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Jimbo. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 8:13:00 PM

    This is beautiful James .Love it!!

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 7:01:00 PM

    So much in so little time, a valued haiku James, enjoyed it, V

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 6:03:00 PM

    a rose is a beutiful symbol whether alive or dying! nice poem