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Swift Touch of Fate

I stand freezing in a warm night
As if snowflakes fall inside my mind.
They say, when you find your true love in  life
Cold air would surround you and make you high.

The night cradled my shifting mind
And made all the love I feel can never hide.
Everything was filled up
And the only thing that's missing are wings that could make us fly.

For a moment the whole world stopped 
Just to make a way for the two of us to talk and laugh.
It brought us together but just for a moment I guess...
Nothing more and nothing less..

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  1. Date: 7/28/2012 8:43:00 AM

    wow... very inspiring!

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 11:48:00 AM

    I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Tricia. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 2:32:00 AM

    beautiful moments

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 10:11:00 PM

    time passes quickly,especially when you are having a good time,nice write Tricia

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:49:00 PM

    ‡ Definitely Earmarked For A Continuation This Love In A Glimpse, My Sweet Beautiful Girl * Please, If Possible Stop Myself Know If Its Ever So ? So, I View Its Further Thoughts; This Priceless Heart * My Luv, Rachel ‡

     Avatar Date: 7/11/2012 8:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey thnx..i will..=)
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:32:00 PM

    Wonderful poem....patrick

    aizpuru Avatar tricia aizpuru Date: 7/11/2012 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey thnx for appreciating..=)
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:55:00 PM

    Interesting take on falling in love

    aizpuru Avatar tricia aizpuru Date: 7/11/2012 7:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yeah..=) thnx..
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:39:00 PM

    Beautiful, sweet poem. Enjoyed the imagery.

    aizpuru Avatar tricia aizpuru Date: 7/11/2012 7:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    =)thank u..