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Forget-Forgot-Forgotten

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Forget-Forgot-Forgotten

There are so many things in my life That just seem to get forgot My brain is a dampend sponge Stuffed in my head that has begun to rot I can't remember Sh#t! In my simple life from day to day I can't blame any of it on God For it's my own fault that I am now this way Younger days of partying Along with the medication that I'm now on today Keep wiping my memory slate clean Causing all memories to quickly fade away Forget,forgot,forgotten... Those three words to me are all the same Sitting in a tub full of missing memories With a rotting sponge that is clogging the drain
7-10-12

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  1. Date: 7/29/2012 2:40:00 PM

    I feel your pain brother I realy do. Look up a weed called wild lettus. It can help you with your sleep and your memory. I have been using it ocasionaly and it has helped me. In fact they have been trying it with altimers patients to improve their memory.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 10:18:00 PM

    dancongratulations in Susan's, "forgotten" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 11:01:00 PM

    Congrats on your first place win, Dan! Sometimes I feel the same way. Maybe we just need more sleep or more poetry. LOL... I would LOVE more of both. Enjoyed the read tonight. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 9:53:00 AM

    Thank you ALL....So much for all the congratulations!!!! :o) You all made me so happy with your Congrats! I know I'm taking the easy street here...But it's the way I must do it.I can't believe it placed where it did? Wow!

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 7/18/2012 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Opps! I forgot to say that I read some really excelent poems for that contest...
  1. Date: 7/18/2012 5:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Forgotten" contest Dan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:05:00 PM

    congrats Dan on a great first place win for this fine write and entry luv..

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 3:06:00 PM

    Great poem... congratulations on your win... Terry

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 1:32:00 PM

    Congrats my dear on your 1st place win, you are worthy of such honor, V

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 1:24:00 PM

    Congrats, Dan. Well deserved win. Outstanding piece. Nice going. Kudos. Thanks for your comments. Ralph

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 12:10:00 PM

    Dan, just a quick congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 11:28:00 AM

    hi Dan now why did I come here, I forgot lol, not really great write my friend nad congrats on your win in the comp< all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 9:05:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Dan....happy for you :) - oxox love f.e.f. Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:18:00 AM

    Such a powerful last 2 lines [remember you can put NEW memories in ;) BIG hugs] Light & Love Congrad's on your win.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:00:00 AM

    Very sad and a winner. congratulations. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 7:14:00 AM

    Really great end verse. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 6:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your #1 win in my contest! Great analogy Dan :)

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 12:09:00 AM

    I'm feeling your forgetting something... lol...KIDDING... good luck in the contest... :-) PD

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 12:00:00 AM

    boo!

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 9:24:00 AM

    edgy mood nicely read in a single breath, dan!.. best of luck and huggs! :)

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 6:46:00 PM

    Oh yeah! Good one Dan.

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 7/18/2012 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you John...
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 12:04:00 PM

    It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Dan and I wish you the best in the contest. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 7/18/2012 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carol,may you walk thru that garden too... :o)
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 10:30:00 AM

    please don't let it deteriorate any more,lol,Dan,great write

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 7/18/2012 9:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks alot Richard,I certinly will try...
  1. Date: 7/11/2012 9:48:00 AM

    Hope you not have ....forget,forgot,forgotten me...:) :) - f.e.f. oxox love Anne-Lise

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 7/18/2012 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Of course not! :o) f.e.f OXOX
  1. Date: 7/10/2012 7:35:00 PM

    I hope this is not true Dan, Mr. Twinkle Eyes remembers much I've read your poetry, maybe you have selective memory like the rest of us, SMILE, vie

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 7/10/2012 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha,ha,ha...You know what? I think your right! I think I do have selective memory? Ha,ha...So nice to see you again,Vie :o)
  1. Date: 7/10/2012 6:25:00 PM

    Good write, Dan. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 7/10/2012 8:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you,Kim...I'll need those wishes. :o)
  1. Date: 7/10/2012 6:21:00 PM

    Well, you are not forgotten, not with these great poems.

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 7/10/2012 8:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joann,you put a smile on my face.. :o)
  1. Date: 7/10/2012 4:45:00 PM

    I'm with you on those thoughts, hey it's the over 40 thing, well written piece my dear friend, much love to you and yours, Cindy

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 7/10/2012 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha,ha...Is it? Oh I forgot! :o)