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Sweet enough to Eat contest

Her angelic smile and darling face,
Melted away a bitter place,
Her graceful presence, genuine and sincere,
Helped my purpose to become exceptionally clear,
For pleasing sounds ran through her hands,
On zebra keys they seemed to stand,
Her unfermented, pure, natural sweet
Performed notes that danced to noble beats,
A delightful fragrance of sheer perfection,
Gave way to an emotional resurrection,
Beloved friend with a cinnamon heart,
Words cannot express where I yearn to start,
When describing a bud that has blossomed into a rose,
Pleasing to the eyes and delightful to one’s nose,
Careful selections of words must be conveyed
For her exquisiteness dries up all weeds that once laid,
In her garden of rejuvenation
Nectars only inspiration,
Not one part of her is stale, dull or stifling to ones appetite,
She is simply beautiful throughout the day and  beyond the night.

By: sabina nicole

Contest: sweet
Written: 7/7/12


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  1. Date: 7/16/2012 8:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super well deserved win in Craig's "Sweet" contest Sabina. Love, Carol

    Nicole Avatar Sabina Nicole Date: 7/16/2012 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank u carol:)
  1. Date: 7/16/2012 3:09:00 AM

    Sweet congrats on the win!

    Nicole Avatar Sabina Nicole Date: 7/16/2012 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you:)
  1. Date: 7/15/2012 7:44:00 PM

    Wow....this is so beautifully written...congrats on your win. Hugs

    Nicole Avatar Sabina Nicole Date: 7/16/2012 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much!!!!
  1. Date: 7/15/2012 5:52:00 PM

    Sabina congrats on your win.Enjoyed the poem very much!

    Nicole Avatar Sabina Nicole Date: 7/16/2012 3:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :)
  1. Date: 7/15/2012 1:50:00 PM

    Congratulations on your great win. Nicely done. See Soup Mail

    Nicole Avatar Sabina Nicole Date: 7/15/2012 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much!
  1. Date: 7/15/2012 1:14:00 PM

    Sabina, congrats on your great win, David

    Nicole Avatar Sabina Nicole Date: 7/15/2012 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You David!