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The Clouds

THERE HE WAS HOLDING OUT HIS HAND.

My voice=
God, can I hold your hand and go with you?

Gods voice~
My sweet child, it is I who will walk with you now! You walked down my path with and without faith. You took my protection to ease your pain. My shielded wings comfort you during your moments of suffering while your life staggered across the earth... Your love and devotion is what made you strong. Every time your dreams were broken. You managed to build more dreams in their place. You called my name during your happiest and saddest moments. You always ran up to me when you fell behind. Your secrets became our private talks. The key to your heart was always unlocked. I was there during your trials and troubles of tribulations. We could not speak, but it was my light that would not allow you to get weak.

My voice=
Is this that dream of beauty? The one in the book my preacher spoke of. 
Yes! I remember it now it is called paradise. I felt this company once before, Lord.
Many times, I have forsaken this light, and still it never left my door.
I felt it the day I was born, and the day I became baptized in your holy name.
I felt this light before, can you explain it some more? 
Lord pleases clarify that day I fell down to my knees and accepted Jesus as my savior? 
Every day since, I felt as if you stood away and walked on by, allowing me to face my own failures’.  Was my life a waste in this impossible world?"

Gods voice~  
My child, this is the everlasting light you will feel every time your body is re-born onto a new road.  This light never left you. 
My sweet child did you not listen, Matthew *19:26* MY SON looked at them and said, "With man this is impossible, but with ME all things are possible. My child you were not searching for the right answers.

My voice= 
My Lord everyone told me if I prayed you would come. Did I not pray right?

Gods voice~ 
My child sometimes your heart asked for more than life itself, which left questions for someone else.  
At times how could I answer when you shunned heaven away from your eyes?
The obvious question is whether this is the final immersing of your souls disguises.

My voice= 
Lord, I have other questions to ask. 
What should I expect out of my personal sins? My testimonial sits in the palm of your hand.
My mind and my heart's inner core have been wicked since my adolescence days. 
How is it that I am in your promise land?

Gods voice~  
Getting right with me has brought you here!

My voice= 
One more question My Heavenly Father.
Can I see her?  I meant, could I see them? My Daughter, Mother's and Sisters~

by;PD

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  1. Date: 12/26/2013 1:13:00 PM
    I have never seen this side of you Linda, This is so beautiful. I truly love this poem. I wish you would write more like this. You are amazing....Hugs.....Roger

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 2:32:00 PM
    you such a talent girl mwah

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 9:14:00 PM
    nice 7 :)

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 8:26:00 PM
    Its beautiful :)

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 5:30:00 PM
    Nice write Linda,I like this one.

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 11:16:00 PM
    Very rich and emotionally satisfying and creative PD. I only wished you had bubbles, lol, just kidding!

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:15:00 PM
    A very healing piece of work. Most of us can relate I am sure--these are questions I often ask. The question is, where do we find the right answers. This is definitely a great place to start. I admire your faith and power. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:34:00 PM
    Hi, sis! I'm still here. I sent my 2nd part soup mail. i hope you have read it. See you again, soon! love 4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 6:50:00 AM
    What a Gem you have created my friend and what a beautiful creation. How beautifully you have sketched the dialogue with the God. Brilliant piece of writing and a great and touching narrative. Your words go deep in the heart and soul of a reader as if he or she is having the dialogue with the God. Another super creation. Love and best wishes always…RavindraK ..Poet D

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 3:12:00 PM
    Very nice inspirational piece from PD. Always a motivation stopping by here PD. Keep up the great words.

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 8:33:00 PM
    great poem! I've often imagined myself meeting god and in my imagination I did not ask her a question. no words were spoken. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 4:30:00 AM
    Very beautiful DP- enjoyed journey and felt your pain- love and blessings, Bren ;.. )

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:22:00 AM
    held me captivated to the last word, love this.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 10:17:00 PM
    A conversation with God the clouds as white and pure as your heart sincerity in your dream everything is possible! :) Thank you PD! :)

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 9:11:00 AM
    i dropped by here to ask your permission to use this poem as one of the monologue or declamation pieces (in declamation contest )of my niece and students as well. is it ok with you my dear friend? thanks a lot!!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:01:00 PM
    well done....

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 8:06:00 AM
    i truly enjoyed this beautiful write. thanks for stopping by... “Faith is the antiseptic of the soul.”~WW

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:13:00 AM
    Wow, how does one percieve you p.d, once read the desire to meet you tends to grow and grow, maybe one day! till then, i'll just have to read you. (Don't forget i'm a master coffee blender of 30 years.) Oh i also am blowing a kiss to you, please catch on the wind, it is sincerity personified

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 1:11:00 PM
    An astounding conversation with God. I think many of us can identify with those questions. I feel as though I've seen part of your journey, God Bless you PD.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 8:25:00 AM
    Hello, PD! How are you? I went for a very long holiday away back home. So, I only got this chance to check and read poems in poetry soup. I am so glad to read yours. It is so wonderful and a very nice narrative poem you made. I got the feeling of melancholy when I read the last part because I will also ask the same question to God since I am also missing my dear dad. Thank you for sharing! God bless you always!

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