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Protecting Sacred Tablets

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Protecting Sacred Tablets

one paper mache moment


eviscerates her temple


legions upon legions soar


                   ...protecting sacred tablets of mind’s eye


brevity of damning woes


spiritual limbs lifted high
                                                                                                                                  
her worn helmet polished gold


                   ...sparrows carry maiden’s heart to Lord’s throne                         
                                                                           

Written for Rick’s new form-PARISE PARIKU-2nd place
6-24-12

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  1. Date: 9/22/2012 9:39:00 AM

    Nicely done.

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 9:05:00 AM

    soupmail

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:21:00 PM

    Rix,, Congratulations in Rick's 7/7/7/10 - (x2) contest. :-) Enjoyed stopping by~ PD

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win Gwen xx

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:07:00 AM

    Congrats on a fantastic write and superb second place win, Gwen! Love it!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda :))

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 6:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "7/7/7/10-x2"" contest Gwen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:43:00 AM

    a knock-out, gwenie..enjoyed the spiritual feel of this one.. congrats and huggs!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 8:19:00 PM

    wow, Gwen, you did MA VA LUS, my dear. BIG congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 12:26:00 PM

    Mailed the drawing this morning. Hope you do well on your ride.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:22:00 AM

    congrats Gwen on a superb 2nd place win for a fantastic entry luv.. been slow going recovery for me this time.. my book has been pulled for the moment till I can edit for publication properly and till I fell better to...

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 4:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your number 2 win Gwen xx

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 4:04:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win with this lovely Paiku! Loved the read, Gwen.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:39:00 AM

    Gwen, congrats on your great win...just love this...David

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:39:00 AM

    Wonderful presentation,fine write.Congratulations on your win,Gwen...

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 8:20:00 PM

    congrats on your win Gwen

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 5:59:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest.

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 9:18:00 PM

    Nice.............Patrick

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 12:30:00 AM

    Going so deeply spiritual all of a sudden? Wait, u have still got a lot to accomplish here. god's blessings will always be with you with such a loving heart! Luv! Jag

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 9:35:00 PM

    Yes.. I recall this one from last night... I'm glad I have no problems dancing around your new incoming post.. anyways.. reading this the second time is even better... always..pd

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 11:32:00 AM

    A awesome write on this poem . Glad to have a few moments of computer time. Kids are down for the weekend and babysitting while they attend the football game tonight. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 9:47:00 AM

    Profound and deep..goodluck, love, ! Jaggy

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 10:04:00 PM

    Hi Rix, as you know I can't find time here like before.. I'm sorry you think i had you blocked...lol... your silly i would never do such a thing... Your one of my favorites on here, and that you know. I might not express it at times,,, but you know I wuv you... and the spirit you lend. Your awesome and very talented.. one day I will grow, you will see as for now, I'm still figuring out my ways. (forms) anyways,, I'm going on and on about me.. he he he..How selfish... wait one more thing.. I've been here on the soup over 2 hours, and i had the worse trouble posting my latest poem. Did you enter my collaboration contest... wondering. About your poem, a very interesting flight emerging through and through... epicly deep.. good luck in the contest...pd