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Amadeus the Pirate

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Amadeus the Pirate

Amadeus the pirate with his long slender neck

rescued his crew amidst a massive shipwreck

with his sharp scaly tail

he  steered an enormous-sized vessel

with his dinosaur height

he could wade at sea level


his carnivorous teeth

were the first things you saw

his grinning incisors 

the sharpest swords of all


he could draw in his air 

changing strong ocean currents

other pirates’ chests empty 

…his size a deterrent


with an effortless sweep 

capturing all the sea’s loot

a Caribbean superhero 

in a prehistoric green suit!



Gwendolen R.
Poetry for Peanut
7-7-12

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 2:42:00 PM
    I'm turning this into a movie. Move aside, you! Or I'll drown thee, wench!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 10:07:00 PM
    Arrrghh!! A fine swashbucklin' Tale to be enjoyed by sea wenches and scaliwags alike. Well done

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    Date: 12/4/2012 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And reptiles will enjoy it as well
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:20:00 AM
    Second child hood Gwennie? You manage to dig up these treasures and bring them to us always in your unique way. This prehistoric sure has a life of his own! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 9:02:00 AM
    lol, great fun, Gwendolen - love it : )

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 9:19:00 PM
    Lmao at Peanut...Who is this Peanut

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 11:51:00 PM
    Your topics very often happen to be ones I am not familiar with. This is one such. However I could almost follow what you were telling thru these attractive lines with such wonderful effect! Jaggy

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 11:27:00 AM
    You had me smiling with this funny write. Cute. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 12:34:00 AM
    You've gone off the "scale's" with this here Gwendolen; I can see a lot of people getting green with envy, L O L) in answer to your comment I am pleased at being involved with Michelle, and obviously support her.! As far as myself is concerned I am finding it very hard, but am trying to keep going: thank you for that comment on her write. yours Joe.

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 9:04:00 PM
    You are on a roll Gwen I'm loving your poetry lately, you are inspired, and coming up with interesting writes, I am going through a dry spell, I am not inspired to write these days, I am enjoying reading others though, luv vie

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 5:48:00 PM
    Ha ha, this is quite the funny write my friend! I really enjoyed the cool descriptions you painted for all of us to envision! Wonderful poem Gwendolen! May the cool air be with you! Great Work!!

    R. Avatar G. R.
    Date: 7/7/2012 5:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I stepped outside my backdoor and shattered millions of blades of brown crunchy grass!!! ughhh-it's soooo hot here! :) Thanks Russell..