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  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:09:00 PM
    The imagery and writing are truly amazing.

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 8:00:00 PM
    X-celent write John! The words really put you into it!You placed them all so well...

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 1:39:00 AM
    Oh, this is very interesting! Superb! :) Wonderful imagery...

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 5:35:00 PM
    wow! this is amazing and wonderful! i love the way it reads aloud and i'm bowled over by the images and rhythms you've used here. "ancient old mariners rusting in rhyme" has to be my favorite line, but many others would vie for second or third place. bravo!

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 5:12:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poem, John. Very smooth rhyme. Great work! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 1:48:00 PM
    I love this poem. They used to be called 'Fireside Companions" reading by the glow of the fire light and 1 or 2 candles.